Troy: After the Fall

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*Im on a hourse..*
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Deltax:

The soldiers spun to the new comer, weapons in hand once more. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw those soldiers holding the prisoners release them for a moment to draw their swords, "Don't let them escape, fools! It's just one girl!" He looked at the new girl again, "State your business." He growled, wiping the spit off his face and flinging it to the ground. She'd pay for that, he swore it.
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"Who says Ihave any buissness to state."she spate back.

*Oh ya my charater is Grave I just remembered!*

This man looked more of a snot rag than any thing and the sholdiers....they diddnent resemble anything of sholdiers. "Try."she tested them as shr pulled out her sleek new sward.She was welladapted to it by now and was ready...
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at the moment, there was some commotion, a girl had been spotted, and the soldiers holding Teladamus and Pelop lossened their grip, seeing this, Deltax shouted at them, but it was too late,

a swift knock, Pelop managed to wrench the sword from the hand of the guard.

"Free her!" shouted Teladamus, who had not managed to escape.

and Pelop dissapeared around a corner, gone.


several minutes later, Pelop stopped at a shallow alcove, having managed to escape, he had continued running till he was sure he had lost the soldiers.

I have to find the commanders tent, free Hesoine, and then return to help my brother. thought Pelop

such a large task for one man to accomplish.
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Is that another character god?*

*Im going to have to go...bye...*
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Deltax:

Deltax swore as he saw Pelop escaping, turning to his second in command, "Try to reason with her, I'll deal with the prisoner."

"Free her!"

Deltax smiled a little to himself. The Trojan didn't know it, but he'd just given him an edge over his brother. He made his way to the command tent and stopped just within it, sword at the ready, "Your cousin escaped."
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"Whats yer name?"one of the sholdiers asked.

"Grave...Grave Sands."she sneared redy as ever for a fight.
She was off her horse now and a few advanced.She had most of there swards out of there hands befor they could even put a full atack on..
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Deltax

The Greek frowned, hearing the sounds of battle from outside. He stood up, hesitating for a moment - what if the other Trojan came while he was out there? "You two! Get over here." Two of his soldiers approached, "Guard her, make sure the other one can't free her."

He ran back to the main camp to see the newcomer still standing, four of his soldiers disarmed while the others had withdrawn a little, eying her warily, "Damn it, I said reason with her!" He shouted, striding towards her, "Stand down - all of you!" He shot a glare at his second before looking back at the girl, "We don't need another fight on our hands - are you Trojan or Greek?"
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"I tend to vary."she answered siling mischeviosly.He could tel she was roge...
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Pelop and Teladamus:

Pelop was watching the soldiers from a high precipice, and saw were they had taken his cousin... but it seemed there would be no luck, for they gaurded her day and night, always four soldiers at a time. there was no way he could take them on by himself. He needed help, but from where would it come? He had no living family that he knew of, save the prisoners, he had no allies from his fathers land, and none from his mothers, either.

Teledaums, meanwhile, was having a less-than-pleasant discussion with Deltax.

"Why, you ask, are we here instead of in our fathers land? i think that it would be simple to figure that out, Cam you not see that if my brother and i returned to our fathers land, that surely we would be slain, unless we had a stong force at our backs, so we came here, to enlist the friendships of anyone who might be left." He says

"As for our cousin, did you happen to know that while you claim vengeance on all Trojans because your father was slain, her father was slain by Achilles' own hand?" Teladmus continues

"how can you claim such wide arrayment of hatred, when she could be satisfied by your head on a plate, and you are quite lucky she does not at this point wish you ill."

** no new characters, the last one i made was the one i gave to you to be yuour "friend" and that was a while ago **
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**I'm gonna jump back a bit to God's post**

Deltax:

He sighed a little, shaking his head, "You don't seem to know all that's happened to my family. Not only did her uncle kill my father, but her father killed my father's best friend and cousin, and her mother's allies killed my brother after the war. It's all Troajns that I want vengeance against, but since remnants of her family survive, I would be content with just those deaths. And no doubt she does wish me ill at this point, though I don't see anything coming from it."

**Back to amber's post now**

"Some kind of mercenary then? Who do side with currently?"
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"Um..."she had to think.Itd be fun to be enamys with him but then itd also save her but if she was alis with him too...She hadnt been on a side for some time....

*Billy you choose...you can eather have her agenst you or with you...But please tell me....*
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*I think I could use someone on my side at the moment :P*
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*Ok you greek?*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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*Yeah, but someone needs to help Pelop. Or maybe Hesione could free herself?*
He had decided to live forever or die in the attempt. - Yossarian, Catch-22

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The last of the human freedoms is to choose one's attitudes.
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