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Troy: After the Fall

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Deltax:

Deltax's eyes narrowed a touch, "The remnants of the Trojan royal family...how interesting." He turned to Pelop, "How could the Trojans hold any influence over the Greeks? You lost the war, your city lies in ruins, and your people are scattered across the land. You have nothing, and yet you speak as though you hold power over us, and as if you could kill the son of Achilles now, even with the greatest soldiers of Myrmidon behind me."
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HEY!

some one tell me whats going on....please?
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Hesione saw Deltax tighten his grip on his sword. Pelop smiled maliciously. "We are the sons of Agamemnon,by the Princess Cassandra, whom he took from Troy." There was silence after he said this. Then, Deltax and his men began to laugh. The grins disappeared from Pelop and Teladamus's faces. "Sons of Agamenon!" roared Deltax, clutching his side from laughter. He straightened. "The sons of Cassandra were killed by Clymenstra, along with their mother,"he said arrogantly,"So you to are nothing but a couple of lying Trojan swine!" Hesione placed her hand on Pelops shoulder to stop him from attacking Deltax. She shot Deltax daggers with her eyes. "Sir, you forget that you are no longer in Greece. You're in my kingdom now, where I'm queen, and you will not insult any of my people, family or otherwise." she said cooly. Deltax turned to her. "The next matter to attend to is what to do with you, my little Trojan beauty." The innuendos that were suggested by his words sent a shiver down her spine as she thought of the fate of her mother and her aunts Cassandra and Iphegenia.
Out flew the web, and floated wide,
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Ok.....no ones litening to me..... :thud: :smt022 *
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i pm-d you. back to the story.
Out flew the web, and floated wide,
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Ok...Here we go...*

Grave had had to let her friend stay behid but Isslidor didn't mind.

She was ridding...fast.

Twards a temple she wasn't sure why but he thought it might hel her..
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Teladamus & Pelop:

"You may not have to be male, my dearest cousin, but if worste comes to worst, we could overpower you, granted that, we do not care either way who rules." Says Pelop

and then both the twins turn to Deltax, their eyes firey with anger.

"You should not speak of what you know nothing, do not call us liars, for we are not, and we take very high offense at that remark. we have proof of our lineage, unless you call us theives as well?" at these words, Teladamus produces a small cloth pouch from his belt, and opens it, turns it upside down, and out falls a ring, of gold.

"We are the sons of Agamemnon, and this should prove it, this ring bears the crest of my father, lord of Mycenae. yes, both our mother and father were slain, but before they had been slain, our mother knew of what was going to happen, knowing that she could not save herself, she managed to substitute a couple of slaves to die in our place. " said Teladamus

"Clymenstra, and the usurper Aegisthus, knew not our faces, and were not aware that we had escaped, and so they was able to claim the throne of Mycenae without interference, for most people believed us dead." said Pelop

at this, Teladamu threw the ring in Deltax's face.

Deltax catches the ring in his free hand(unhindered by his sword) and looks at it carefully,

"Sure enough, it is the ring of Agamemnon." Deltax says, after a long pause, abruptly, the soldiers' laughter stops.
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Deltax:

"Well then, if you are truly the sons of Agamemnon, why do you seek to reclaim a ruined kingdom when your father's still stands?" He looked back at Hesione, "And I hardly think you're in a position to command me." He took a step closer to her, smiling slightly, "Because whether or not this is your kingdom, you are my prisoner now, and what happens to you and your cousins is entirely up to me."
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Hesione took a step back as Deltax approached her. Her cousins struggled to break out of the soldiers grasp.

(Sorry, all I got right now)
Out flew the web, and floated wide,
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'The curse has come upon me' cried
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*Adrian were are you guys?I just want to know...*
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Deltax:

Deltax stopped, laughing softly, "Don't worry, princess, I'm not interested in you. Why should I be, when your family has brought nothing but death on mine?" He turned back to his soldiers, "Take them back to the camp. Make sure you keep them separated - I don't want them plotting. And have someone take word back to Greece that the rumours about Troy were true."
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How about you billy...were are you guys?*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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I'm not really sure...we're at the Trojan's hiding place, feel free just to stumble on us
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*sounds like fun!*smile*

*Wait!Whats my name?!I havent posted for so long...!*

She bust into a camp ground instead taking a detour. It roused many men....
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
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~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Hesione struggled against the soldiers grip. "And yours has brought nothing but pain and death to mine as well!" she yelled at Deltax. When he turned to face her, she spit. It landed squarly on his cheek. He grabbed her roughly by the chin. "That was sheer stupidity Trojan." he growled at her. "Put her in my tent." he told the soldier that was holding her. "We'll talk later." he told her. The soldier roughly dragged Hesione away. Suddenly a rustle in the bushes revealed a girl, who ran out onto the camp grounds...
Out flew the web, and floated wide,
The mirror cracked from side to side.
'The curse has come upon me' cried
The Lady of Shalott



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