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Troy: After the Fall

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ahhhhhh, im confused...someone bring me in. thats not what i meant god.
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until someone else joins, i am going to be Grave Sands Friend... so ill make up another character... IF YOU WANT THIS CHARACTER GO AHEAD. YOU CAN HAVE IT...


Name: Isslidir Larachme

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Nationality: Persian/Arabic

Personality: Quick witted and Cold. Sharp as a razor, uses her intelligence to cut down her adversaries to size, being only 4'11" she is VERY short, yet a deadly fighter. Sarcastic and caustic. not someone you want annoyed at you.

History: Born in Persia, she ran away to escape a marriage with a nobleman that she did not love. she was captured by slave traders and taken to Troy, where she lived for about 5 years, until it fell, when she was young, she was told by a seer that she would die givng her life as sacrifice for a friend, so since then she has been uafraid of death.

other: whatever

is that a good enough friend?

as i said, anyone who wants her can have her. that being said,


peace.
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ignore this post.
Last edited by God on Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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God, are you reading what's happening in the story???!!! I left your characters and mine about to meet Deltax and his Myrimidons! Pleae, let's keep up the storyline that others have posted, or else it will get VERY CONFUSING. :)
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"What's her name?"the healer asked.

"Issile*is that how you spell it?*"Grave answered.

"Hum..."he hummed in cunfigurasion as he worked....

...................................................................

"How are you?" Grave asked as she sat up in bed.....
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ambercoultis, u r going to bring your characters to Troy soon, right? :D
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Deltax's eyes followed the archers as they retreated again, apparently oblivious to his presence. The girl had escaped, some consolation, Another loss for Troy, however small, is another victory for Greece... He began picking his way back through the rubble towards his soldiers again.

"Curse the Gods!" someone shouted from above him, "Greeks!"

He spun to see three people standing on a nearby hill - identical twins and a girl, all obviously enemies from their words. He shouted a command to his soldiers, who dropped what they were doing to draw their weapons and make for the hill.
He had decided to live forever or die in the attempt. - Yossarian, Catch-22

Wide-eyed stupid.

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hey someone brings me in please......errr im lost.
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*Ya I will...Hey singer what's your characters name i can bring them in.O buy the way i lost computer privlagtes at home...*
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im confused now. singer what character would you like? you can have any of mine(but not all... take the friend if you have no preference.)

im sticking with Teladamus and Pelop. if you want one or the other, just tell me.
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*note: HEY BILLY

"He spun to see three people standing on a nearby hill - identical twins and a girl, all obviously enemies from their words. He shouted a command to his soldiers, who dropped what they were doing to draw their weapons and make for the hill."

are the identical twins supposed to be me? (Teledamus and Pelop?) if not, then who are they? and if yes, whos the girl? i think we may have som confusion.
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God, the twins are your characters, the girl is my character Hesione, who is their cousin. Billy, they are not enemies, they are trying to help each other out. Hesione was taking the to her temple/shelter when Deltax showed up. Does this clear up any of the confussion? :)
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Ah, alright then, thanks. I'm going to be gone for a few days as well, so could someone keep my character alive?
He had decided to live forever or die in the attempt. - Yossarian, Catch-22

Wide-eyed stupid.

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u got it :D come back soon!
Out flew the web, and floated wide,
The mirror cracked from side to side.
'The curse has come upon me' cried
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ummm... im good now. i didnt even know my characrter KNEW your characters, but im good now. sorry for the confusion. so were in troy about to meet Deltax, great.
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