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Thu Oct 25, 2012 3:21 pm
Sourdude16 says...



when i say portals i refer to any rip in the space-time continuum that allows transport from one time or place to another nearly instantaneously.
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 5:17 pm
Caesar says...



So... he's still setting fire to space-time :P

And, allowing the fact these portals can in fact be created, it would be a very risky move indeed to take one. No telling where or when you'd end up.
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 5:23 pm
Sourdude16 says...



actually, i was thinking just the space around that portal, not quite the actually portal. Now the idea was that if one were to occur on a random basis due to the randomosity of the planet and someone where to jump in one, I could set them on fire before they reach the other end. I can completely remove the idea if it is preferred
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 5:28 pm
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Ah, I see. I think removing is a bit extreme. Modifying would be the preferred course of action (Qezeebûth disapproves). Windel can set fire to pretty much anything, being a Fire adept. If they try to jump through the portal, sbam, fried chicken is in order. More balanced this way, yes? ^^
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:20 pm
thestorygirl says...



So what do you mean about me editing my location?
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:25 pm
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Well, firstly, try to bulk out her history a bit, please. Then, add in where she's residing at the moment.
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:44 pm
KingLucifer says...



Yo Ita, I check out right?
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:47 pm
Caesar says...



That you do. No problems there. The history is a mite confusing near the end, but s'okay.
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Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:00 pm
thestorygirl says...



Okay. I'll do it tomorrow.
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Fri Oct 26, 2012 5:42 pm
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Also. We start tomorrow, Sunday if things go wrong, at the latest. Imparied and Desticakes, nor chupatoasta, haven't made an appearance. They can still join in later, but we start regardless.
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LiteraryVenom says...



So excited for this. :3
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Fri Oct 26, 2012 7:42 pm
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Okay, just took care of my history. Let me know if there's anything else I should change.
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Fri Oct 26, 2012 8:21 pm
KingLucifer says...



Ita, I won't be able to post during the weekends and on tuesdays. During my last class is the only time I'll be able to post on Friday's.
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Sat Oct 27, 2012 2:51 pm
Caesar says...



Noted.

Uhm uhm Imp, the attempt at humor is refreshing, but do add her history in, okay? If only the essentials. It's... necessary. We need to know a lil bit more about her.
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Sat Oct 27, 2012 3:44 pm
Chupatoasta says...



Checking in :)
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