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Mon Jul 04, 2022 11:34 pm
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shatteredstones says...



I mustered up the diagram. :>


Name and pronouns: Shaun 'The Shark' Martinez (he/him)
Age: 24
Appearance (just a few lines is okay): He has medium length brown hair and deeply tanned skin. He is 5'5 and has a slim muscular build. He does not wear anything too formal, usually in a muscle shirt flannel or some other jacket chanclas and jeans or jogging pants. Oh and he also has blue green eyes and wears a face mask over his lower face which he never removes in public. Secrets secrets...
Personality: He acts unimpressed and grouchy. He might be grouchy but usually he is very entertained by what is going on. He is rather laid back yet skeptical and though he isn't the tallest guy he has an authority about him.
Complaint, Complainer, or Controller? Controller
Other: wouldn't you like to know hehehe.
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Mon Jul 04, 2022 11:54 pm
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Seirre says...



I know virtually nothing about DnD xD So I'm gonna just embrace the fight scene and fake it til I make it regarding anything actually DnD related :3

also, all your characters sound fabulous! I cannot wait to see how they all interact with each other~
u make me go wat cuz u so wat n u can always go what around u watcha

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Fri Jul 08, 2022 1:56 pm
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Liminality says...



If anyone wants to bump into Mina while she's running away, or pick up the mysterious piece of paper that fell out of her pocket go for it! (you could fill the paper in with almost anything you like . . . maybe a grocery list, a letter to Santa, etc. if it's too out-of-character for her to have, which is not likely, I'll just make up a story about how it's not hers and how it ended up in her pocket xD)
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Sun Jul 10, 2022 8:23 pm
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Moonglade says...



Oop… did my Layla get rebranded as Mr Benson or is this someone else?

(This role play resonates deeply with me. Now please everyone only drive once you have the seat belt on… my ears can’t deal with my that horrible noise.)
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Sun Jul 10, 2022 8:36 pm
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Shady says...



Ahhh sorry, everyone! I ended up taking a road trip with some of my friends I haven't seen in six years (@_@) and this is the first time I've been on a laptop since I launched this RP rip.

Lovely work so far, though! @Moonglade I think poor Layla may have been left unnoticed in all the hubbub, so I'mma drag her back into things--

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 8:50 pm
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Moonglade says...



Don’t worry Shady! I’m happy to hear you got to spend some good times with old friends.

(I feel like this is the scene where the quiet old lady is ignored and then it starts to rain.)

Wait… wait… wait… What if everyone gets trapped inside the noise maker’s house by some huge rainstorm or something like that?
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 4:22 am
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shatteredstones says...



I introduced shark
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 1:40 pm
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Liminality says...



@Moonglade Right Mr Benson's an NPC! Just to clarify Mr Benson is the one calling the police, and I think you wrote in Layla knocking directly on the apartment door? I think I'll put off writing my next post for a bit until we can get Layla back in the action, maybe by responding to Shark if @shatteredstones agrees?
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 5:29 pm
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Moonglade says...



@Liminality I think that would work very well. Of course, if Gem agrees.
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 7:00 pm
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Of course
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 7:17 pm
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Moonglade says...



I have completed my post! @shatteredstones I hope I didn’t portray Mister Martinez horribly.
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 8:15 pm
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shatteredstones says...



Oh no you did alright. Not to be nitpicky but in the future I would like to voice my own character. I'm not upset and it is completely fine that you didn't know. <3 I didn't specify. I think you portrayed him fairly well though!
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 8:19 pm
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Moonglade says...



Sorry Gem. (Next time if a conversation happens we can co-write it.)
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 8:21 pm
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Dont stress over it it is absolutely fine. I agree that sounds very enjoyable! If later we need to co-write a reply I would love to.
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Fri Jul 15, 2022 1:31 pm
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Liminality says...



@WeepingWisteria your character could hop over to the coffee shop Mina is in if you want! (after they've visited the noise lair or before, hmm who knows) I've put their fave drink on the menu:

Mina idly read the menu that was printed and hung behind the barista. One of the items was a Venti iced coffee.
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