That works! Otherwise, maybe we can break down the adventuring to ghost town to two posts between you and Val? Also, here are some ideas of what could happen when they venture to ghost town ~
Bickering about ghosts and survival and stuff
A little animal scares Susan maybe
The sky seems to be getting darker the further they go in, even though it should be late morning
The vegetation seems to be getting thicker and thicker, and they gotta push vines and cobwebs out of the way
After going through a thorny underbrush section, they encounter an abandoned town
It basically looks like 1940s tiny town but some shoddy huts... almost as if there was an influx of survivors from WWII that came in and built this town
Explore town! Everything is creepy. Shacks for homes and stuff. Probably lots of remnants, like pottery, old radios, remnants of a small boat/plane, some writings, etc.
You could also make up ghosts here. That'd be interesting.
As soon as they get creeped out, they seemed to get trapped in whatever building they came in, and @veeren's Captain Morgan makes an appearance
alright so I quickly wrote all this down and you don't have to do these things at all lol but I thought I'd shoot you some ideas for inspiration! Feel free to write however long/short of a post you want, so you don't have to feel super rushed to get to veer's character. But @veeren, your character will be making an appearance very very soon
I loved both of your posts!! I'll write another one tonight. @Elinor do you want to go after me? or before? I think I remember you saying you wanted to chase down the story of the two boys and I'm not sure what you have in mind but I can follow your lead
I hope it's alright...I posted again. I wrote a little about the shack, so you guys can write about the town yourselves, and we even met the first ghost!
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Posted again!! I think I covered enough time for Jack and Moira to have been looking around so maybe in Val's post the girls could run into those two again, maybe at the same time as them talking to those boys?
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omygoshhhh @HarryHardy you are the most prolific writer I have ever met lol good job on the post!
@Valkyria I agree and I'm thinking that you can go next and get the gals up to Jack and Moira, and you can end the post with Captain Morgan's eerily familiar voice! @veeren you're almost up >:) we're doing a SB style post so I hope it's cool if you can do that, otherwise poke me and we can do a collab post
also veer u should totally think of a cryptic poem for them to decipher about setting the ghosts free and burning bones n stuff >_>
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