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Tue Nov 03, 2020 4:19 am
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Elinor says...



Looks good @Carina! I posted too.

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Tue Nov 03, 2020 1:48 pm
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KateHardy says...



Sue's holding onto the hope that the lifeboats are going to be coming around with her dad on board...ahhhhh...what will happen to her when she realizes THERE ARE NO LIFEBOATS

Aaand everyone's posts were great!!
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Tue Nov 03, 2020 9:31 pm
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Valkyria says...



I posted! Eliza is hoping that rescue will come.

And, dum-dum-dum...the first body has been found.
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Wed Nov 04, 2020 3:46 am
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Not gonna lie, I contemplated Jack possibly being ex-military because of this post lol
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Ooooh...I totally got some ex military vibes there xD...and sorry for taking so long to post...ahh...NaNo hath swamped me...

And poor Susan's a little scared of Jack right now...and refusing to let go of her hope...I hope its alright?
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Thu Nov 05, 2020 12:41 am
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Carina says...



I'm going to leave it up for debate :P someone would have to prod for his background someday

But YEA @harryhardy the post looks great! I was honestly about to post Jack being all mean to her like "NO WE ARE THE FREAKIN RESCUE TEAM!!!" so it's a good thing Valk went first lol

I swear he's not normally like this, he's just stressed as hecc
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Fri Nov 06, 2020 3:00 am
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Thanks Carina...aaand I posted...late again
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Fri Nov 06, 2020 6:51 am
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Carina says...



Jack: EVErYONE LISTEeN UP!!! STOP COMPLAINING AND HELP ME FIND THINGS
Also Jack: *brings flamingo pool floatie to life*

Also Harry, nice guess ;)
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Sat Nov 07, 2020 5:26 am
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Ooooh...

Also the world's strongest flamingo pool floot...xD...
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Sat Nov 07, 2020 5:30 am
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Elinor says...



I know I’m a post behind everyone else, and I can probably do one post tomorrow and one post Sunday if I need, but maybe @veeren could take one of my posts if need be? That would work best for me, but I thiiink we might be at the word count anyway?

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Sat Nov 07, 2020 6:53 am
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Carina says...



LOL yes imma just assume that the flaimngo float was crumpled into a ball to be blown up later and then yeeted itself off the sinking ship without anything poking holes on it

Jack is definitely going to offer the flamingo boat to Susan while they look for dead bodies can u imagine just how ABSURD this will look-

i also like how the gals straight up gossiped about jack right away LOL

and that works, @Elinor! So far we're more than double the word count requirement every week and that's only because of the required post count. I've talked about this with Omnom; the next time LSS happens, the post requirement will likely go away, but for now we'll have to continue with the mega commitment aslkdjfhksd WE'VE BEEN DOING SO GOOD THOUGH GUYS

also, feel free to have Moira find a door or bed headboard or something wooden/buoyant I can't think of any other examples right now lol. We can assume that the piece she finds is big enough for her and Jack, and then Susan and Eliza can use the float and tied up boards.

@veeren I totally forgot to ask if you wanted to post last week oop >_> my b. you can do another poem post this week if you want though!
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Sat Nov 07, 2020 1:01 pm
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Sat Nov 07, 2020 3:22 pm
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Elinor says...



I posted!

Also, I wanted to ask if everyone would be okay if I always did four posts a week rather than five, at least for the time for the time being, but I'd want to make sure you'd be okay with posting every week, @veeren?

It's possible I could go up to five posts again in the future. I definitely underestimated how busy I am, and I want to continue to be a part of this roleplay, just in a way that makes sense for me.

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Sat Nov 07, 2020 7:55 pm
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veeren says...



i'm definitely up for it if you need it, no complaints here :)
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Sun Nov 08, 2020 6:16 am
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Carina says...



Looks like only @HarryHardy and @veeren are left to post this week, and then we'll start back up on Monday! Harry, feel free to assume that the characters took some vines and went to work tying the three "rafts" (lol) together, and then you can end the post with them pushing it in the water as the start of the rescue mission. That'll be a perfect segue to Week 4 and @veeren's ominous poem of hinting that they will find many dead people >_>

veer, make sure you post before midnight on Sunday! and make sure it's after Harry so you're the last post of the week. thx b

also @Valkyria, I'm really liking Eliza's dynamic! esp for reasons that Jack finds personal lol
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