@AmadeusW you've posted three times in a row, m'dear! Though there isn't an established order, the story can't advance from everyone's point of view if you keep doing so, which kinda goes against the whole point of a Storybook. so please: do avoid posting again for now, at least until a few of us have done so as well.
Now, it's great that you're suggesting new elements to the SB, but do keep in mind to always introduce what it is before doing so - I'm saying that also because I know what it's like, as I used to forget more often than now that people aren't in my mind. For instance: what's "the red liquid"? Why does it attract the Impalpables to Maverick? Why is it necessary for them to come to him? Also, why is it necessary for this red liquid to even be a thing?
Though it is commendable of you to want to help the story moving forward, the pace is going to remain as annoyingly slow as it currently is, simply because Life is happening at different times for all of us. I've been meaning to post for some time, and I should soon, but I can't necessarily define "soon" for ya.
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