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999: Nine Hours - Nine Persons - Nine Doors DT



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Sun May 28, 2017 1:57 am
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I'm really liking all the code names your guys are coming up with! :) So that we can get more character profiles in quickly, I've hatched a competition of sorts for you all (*cough*bribery*cough*):

To the person who first submits their character profile, I will reward them with a heroic role for their character (related to the first Nanory Game nine years ago). You won't know who submitted their CP first until the end of the week, when I will reveal the winner. So get those profiles in!

The last person to submit their CP will have their character die a horrible death in the first scene of the storybook. Just kidding XD

Some advice regarding the History and Ulterior Motives/Secrets sections of the CP: All the characters remember everything about their own past (or at least they think they do), however because this is a suspense/thriller a lot of what they know is only hinted at and is mostly kept secret until later on. Part of the fun in this SB is keeping your character's knowledge secret from not only the other characters, but also the other YWSers :D Therefore people who have important connections to the first Nonary Game (I'm looking at you, people I've messaged) should try not to reveal their character's involvement in their SB posts... at least not at the beginning of the SB.

If any of you need help brainstorming your character (and/or their involvement) or have any questions, send me a PM and I'll help you out :)

Spoiler! :
*Casually tags everyone so they read this post* (sorry to anyone who has seen it already)
@Dino @Sassafras @Chaser @rosette @Lael @Sheyren @Falconer @Wolfical
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Wolfi says...



The fact that "Just kidding" was crossed out concerns me xD

Challenge accepted ~
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*you are filled with DETERMINATION*
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I was just talking to rosette and I realised there might be one thing that needs clarifying about this SB:

Rest assured, you really don't need to worry about knowing the DS game. This storybook doesn't require any former knowledge or information from the game at all (but if you have already done research it won't amount to nothing).

Anything that the SB copies from the DS game I will explain here in the DT (which will only be the setting and how the game works), but everything else will be completely new and different from the game source material (the characters, plot, backstory and all that main stuff).

Again, get those profiles cooking, and PM me if you need help! :)

Spoiler! :
@Dino @Sassafras @Chaser @rosette @Lael @Sheyren @Falconer @Wolfical
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Sorry for posting twice ^_^

This is a reminder:

We are already about halfway through this week! That means only three more days until I reveal the character profile winner. Let's all try and get our profiles up by that time.

You: "But what happens if we still haven't submitted our character profile by the end of the week?"

Me wearing a convincing disguise: *strokes chin* "Hard to say... But I wouldn't take the risk and find out. Who knows what that sadistic storybook manager is up to! No mercy ever came from a caffeinated feline..." *shuffles away ominously and disappears*

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Wolfi says...



Dino appears to be taking a break from YWS, so we might need to find a new participant to take her place.
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
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Do not let your hearts be troubled
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So, how do we do that? Do we just open it up and take the first volunteer, or does anyone have any available participants in mind? I guess this means we won't be seeing each other's characters yet...
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
  





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Don't worry, we will still move forward despite not having number 1. I will open up the storybook again for someone to take Dino's spot. In the meantime we can begin writing our first SB posts :3

And yes, if any of you can think of another YWSer who would enjoy participating in this storybook, it would be very helpful if you could blackmail ask them to join.

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Now, for the moment we've all been waiting for! (Or not). The winner of the character profile race goes to... *drumroll*

@Sheyren *cue confetti explosions* :smt003 (please claim your prize at the end of this announcement via PM)

I have now approved all the characters (@Falconer just needs to add some info we discussed to her CP before I approve it, and @Sassafras still needs to create hers). Take time to read them all, and consider who your character might befriend or dislike out of the group.

Before we start posting in the storybook, I will provide a bit of knowledge on the setting and how the game works. So stay tuned ^^

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EDIT:
Important! I have created a WFP for us to plan and discuss character relationships and general plot-stuff overtime.

Link is here: https://coffeecat.writerfeedpad.com/1

I will also add the WFP link to the first DT post so you know where to find it ;)

Spoiler! :
@Sassafras @Chaser @rosette @Lael @Sheyren @Falconer @Wolfical
  





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Danggggg, that post is intense!
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
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Hell yeah it is ;)

I haven't had much time lately, but now I can finally give you all the low-down on what is what, so we can get this story crackalackin'!

Spoiler! :
Side Note: that just reminded me of something...
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I know, I'm terrible XD

Aaaaaaaanyways. Let's do this! Prepare yourself for an info dump...


What You Know: The Setting

As you should be aware, your character has woken up on an early 20th century cruise liner. In this ship, all of the external doors and windows have been sealed, and many of the internal doors are locked. This means that any outdoor areas and a lot of inside rooms are completely inaccessible to the characters. Additionally, when the ocean water gradually starts to rise inside the ship from the bottom, it will close off many lower rooms and levels.

There are five main ship levels: Bottom Deck, E Deck, C Deck, B Deck, and A Deck. Here is a simple picture of the levels:
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The characters can access the top four levels, but Bottom Deck is (thought to be) off limits due to it already being flooded once the characters wake up.

There are various facilities and sections on the ship. I have included a mix of rooms from the official DS game along with some new ones. The following is each area or room according to the deck they are located on:

Rooms & Locations
Spoiler! :
A Deck:
- Captain's Quarters (split into two small rooms: the communications office and the actual quarters)
- Wheelhouse (the ship bridge, featuring two large steering wheels for controlling the ship)
- Chartroom (small room with various charts and maps)
- Hidden Surveillance Room (a small modern room with multiple computer monitors displaying live security footage from all over the ship)

B Deck:
- 1st Class Staterooms & Hallway (a hallway containing fancy, luxurious residential rooms)
- 1st Class Smoking Room (a public lounge dedicated to smoking, popular in the early 1900s)
- Casino (a large room with a wine/alcohol bar and many tables used for gambling)
- Music Bar (another large room containing a low stage with musical instruments)
- Hidden Backstage Room (attached to Music Bar room; contains a big, futuristic machine)

C Deck:
- 2nd Class Staterooms & Hallway (a much longer hallway containing average, comfortable residential rooms)
- Staff Kitchen (one large room with 3 different subsections: the main kitchen, the pantry, and the walk-in freezer)
- Medical Room (a small room with surgical and medicinal equipment)
- Library (a medium-sized room full of bookshelves)

D Deck:
- 3rd Class Cabins & Hallway (yet another hallway containing small, basic residential rooms; your character wakes up in one of these cabins)
- 1st Class Dining Saloon (a large, fancy dining area with many tables and chairs)
- Chapel (a rectangular room for religious worship, complete with an alter)
- Hidden Science Laboratory (behind the stained glass mural of the Chapel; a modern room filled with scientific technology equipment, including a central computer)
- Stairwell Room (a tiny room with an iron stairwell leading to E Deck)

E Deck:
- 3rd Class Dining Saloon (a large mess hall with long benches)
- Cargo Storage Room (a vast, steel-walled room full of crates, boxes, sacks and barrels)
- Confinement Room (a small, prison-like room with disturbing writing on the walls)
- Incinerator (a huge, circular metal-walled room, likely used for disposing of waste)
- Hidden Trapdoor and Ladder (leads to Bottom Deck's enclosed Propellor Shaft Tunnel)

Bottom Deck:
- Turbine Engine & Reciprocating Engines
- Propellor Shaft Tunnel (a long tunnel leading to the ship's giant propeller)
- Boiler Rooms
- Coal Bunkers
- Fresh Water Tanks

There is also a series of Central Staircase rooms that connect decks A through to D. After waking up and escaping their individual cabins, the characters will all gather together for the first time at the C Deck Staircase room, where Zero will announce the Nonary Game to them.


What You Know: The Game

This is a quote from the official Nintendo DS game dialogue during Zero's announcement:
At that moment… A speaker crackled to life, and a cold, eerie voice filled the room… “Welcome aboard. I welcome you all, from the bottom of my heart, to this, my vessel.”

The seven companions had heard the voice as well, and many of their faces had gone pale. They looked around frantically, desperate to locate the source of the voice. At last they found it… A speaker set in the ceiling.

“I am Zero… The captain of this ship. I am also the person who invited you here.” The voice was harsh, obscured occasionally by the crackle of static… “I mean to have you participate in a game. Some of you, I know, are familiar with this game. The Nonary Game. It is a game… where you will put your life on the line. The rules of the Nonary Game can be found upon your persons.”

Silver reached into his pocket, and pulled out a small slip of paper. Junpei followed suit, and dug into the pocket of his pants.

“It would seem Zero has seen fit to grace us each with a letter,” said Lion. “Would you mind terribly reading it to us, young man?”

Junpei read: “On this ship, you will find a handful of doors emblazoned with numbers. We will call them the numbered doors. The key to opening these numbered doors are the numbered bracelets that each of you possess. Should you total the numbers on your numbered bracelets and find that the digital root of that number is equal to the number of that door, the door will open. Only those who have opened the door may pass through.


Let's take a moment to pause. Before you get overwhelmed, let me assure you that I will be handling all the technical details, such as digital roots. And obviously who the characters are and what they say will be different. So you don't have to think about that stuff. Okay, let's continue...

"There are, however, limits. Only 3-5 people can pass through one numbered door. All those who enter must leave, and all who enter must contribute. The purpose of the game is simple: Leave this ship alive. It is hidden, but an exit can be found. Seek a way out… Seek a door that carries a 9.”

Zero spoke again, “There is one last thing I must tell you. As you have no doubt surmised, this ship has begun to sink. On April 14th, 1912… the famous ocean liner Titanic crashed into an iceberg. After remaining afloat for 2 hours and 40 minutes, it sank beneath the waters of the North Atlantic. I will give you more time. Nine hours. That is the time you will be given to make your escape.” The voice finished, and the speaker went silent.

The sound of a bell tolling echoed through the hall. It came from the dance hall adjacent to the stairwell.

It took the assembled on the stairs mere moments to trace the sound to an antique clock embedded in the wall.

7… 8… 9…

The sound of the 9th bell faded away. The 10th never came. That meant the time was 9 o’clock. Most likely 9 o’clock in the evening. When Junpei had peered out the window of his cell, he’d seen nothing but blackness. It had to be nighttime. If that was the case, then they would need to escape by 6am the following day…

“Now, it is time,” came Zero’s voice again. “Let our game begin. I wish you all the best of luck.” The speaker went silent, and did not speak again.


All this will happen, more or less. What Zero says and what is written on the game rules letter will be exactly the same, word for word. The clock tolling after will also happen.

Once all this basic setup information is covered in the storybook, we won't need to go over any more of this. So feel free to relax your shoulders and breathe a sigh of relief.

There's one last dump of game info. This part concerns the numbered door bracelet scanners (from a second note Zero provides the characters):
“I shall tell you of the function of the RED, the DEAD, and of the bracelet. The RED is the Recognition Device. It will verify your number. Beside every numbered door, you will find a RED. The DEAD is the Destructive Device. It does exactly what it says. Once you have passed through a numbered door, you must use the DEAD to stop the detonator in your bracelet.

“But perhaps you are wondering… What does this detonator detonate? I am afraid this may be something of a surprise. I have placed a small bomb inside of you, and the people whom you are about to meet. You swallowed it while you were unconscious. I have no doubt that by the time you read this note, the bomb will have passed your stomach and found its way to your small intestine. In other words, you will be unable to regurgitate it. I suggest you do not try.

“As I mentioned before, the bracelet on your left hand contains a detonator. Think of it as a remote fuse, or timer, for the bomb in your body. There is only one condition that will cause it to detonate. That condition is that you enter a numbered door. Once you have done so, the timer will activate, no matter who you may be. You will have 81 seconds. If, after that time, the detonator has not been deactivated, it will send a signal to the bomb in your body, instructing it to explode.

“In order to deactivate the detonator, every person who verified their number at the RED must also verify their numbers at the DEAD. Once all numbers have been verified by the DEAD, you need only pull the lever at its side, and the countdown will cease. Anyone who does not verify their number at the RED will find themselves unable to verify their number at the DEAD. You must also keep in mind that the numbered doors will close automatically after 9 seconds have passed. So long as the door is open, the DEAD will not function. You would do well to remember this.

“Lastly, let us discuss how to remove the bracelets. There are only 2 ways to do so. One: You escape from the ship. Two: Your heart rate reaches zero. It will shut down automatically. If you attempt to force it off, or disable the detonator, the bomb within you will immediately explode.

“This is all the information which I can impart to you. How you choose to use it is for you to decide. If used wisely, you can eliminate those who might be a danger to you. For a time, you would be able to control your fate. I wish you the best of luck.”


That is it. Those are the game rules, exactly how they were explained in the official game.

Now please don't hurt me for making you read all that.


What You Know: Zero

Zero is the captor of your character, and is the one controlling the Nonary Game. Zero's identity is unknown, since Zero wore a gas mask with a big trench coat when kidnapping your character, and always speaks through a voice changer.

Where and when Zero abducted your character depends on you, but the method is the same for everyone: while your character was alone, Zero knocked him/her unconscious with a Soporil gas bomb. That was your character's last memory before waking on the ship.


What You Know: The Truth

If I haven't stressed the word "secrets" enough, I will now. Think of it this way: The Truth is the big, ultimate plot mystery at the end of the storybook, and each character is holding a piece of it to themselves. The pieces will only join at the end, when all the character secrets are revealed.

It won't be the end of the world if you accidentally reveal your character's secret early on, but if everyone knows The Truth already, the story will get boring pretty fast.

However, hinting at secrets in your posts is very, VERY good! Hinting lets everyone know that there is something being hidden, but doesn't explain what it is. Please do this abundantly.

There are two universal goals in this 999 storybook:

1. Escape the ship (i.e. find Door 9) before the nine hours is up.
2. Discover The Truth (all the pieces of the mystery).

Within these two goals, you will have a tone of freedom to decide where your character explores, what they find, who they interact with etc.

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I'll be writing up my character's first post in the next day or so. Try doing the same if you can, and ponder what things your character might notice or think that the others might not; they all wake up in the same type of cabin (3rd Class Cabin) and find each other at the C Deck Staircase room, so diversity in posts is good.

Lastly, I will add this info dump to the first post of the DT, so you know where to find it for future reference.

Spoiler! :
@Sassafras @Chaser @rosette @Lael @Sheyren @Falconer @Wolfical
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Can I get some dramatic explosion noises up in here if you're still with me? This DT is starting to feel suspiciously lonesome... (lonesome... lonesome...)

On that note, we really do need more users aboard this ship. If any of you care to advertise the storybook I would be most grateful.
  





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I'm up for posting, if you'd like.

Once you get your post up, that is.
  





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Sure, that'd be great. Then you can post after me :)
  





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*KAAABOOOOOOMPHHSSSSHHHH*
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Iggy says...



Room for one more?
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