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Tue Nov 17, 2015 1:59 am
Lefty says...



That sounds really good, @Chaser. And you're certainly welcome to post it!

If you didn't want it to be that serious early on, you could maybe tweak it a little and have them just think they're cool, joking about what the suits might do but not having any idea what they're for and not being suspicious of them. Then maybe they hear someone coming and Neon bolts and Cole comes out behind him after grabbing a handful (maybe they were in a bag they ripped open and he stuffed the bag in his bag to hide the evidence in panic). Or something along those lines. Just some thoughts if you didn't want it to be so serious.
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Tue Nov 17, 2015 2:29 am
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I dialed back the seriousness a bit, but I couldn't change it completely. Regardless, the post is up.
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.





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Tue Nov 17, 2015 2:57 am
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HazelGrace16 says...



Nice reference haha @Chaser
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game





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Tue Nov 17, 2015 3:43 am
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I really like the post, @Chaser. :) Is it still okay with you guys if Jinx witnessed some of their sneaking, but chose not to say anything? :)
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Tue Nov 17, 2015 3:47 am
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Chaser says...



They didn't lock anything behind them, so it's perfectly possible.
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Tue Nov 17, 2015 5:55 am
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Loved your post! The "taking over China with potatoes" part was genius. I laughed harder than I probably should have. :) Anyway, I thought it was great.

I should be able to get my Cole post up by tomorrow. ;)
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Tue Nov 17, 2015 5:59 am
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LordZeus says...



@Chaser Neon is going to need tons and tons of potatoes... And when I say tons, I mean literally TONS.





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Tue Nov 17, 2015 3:37 pm
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Steggy says...



As I promised, I posted c:
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:22 am
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Wolfi says...



Nice post, Steg! :)
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Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
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Wed Nov 18, 2015 1:49 am
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Thanks, Wolf ^^
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Thu Nov 19, 2015 1:33 am
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Who all are we still waiting on??
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Thu Nov 19, 2015 1:45 am
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Sonder says...



*raises hand sheepishly* I'm gonna try for tomorrow, I swear.
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Thu Nov 19, 2015 5:23 am
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Hey, guys! Sorry I haven't gotten my Cole post up sooner. It's about half written. If it's not up by tonight, it will be by tomorrow.

People we're waiting on: Me (Cole), Nighcrawler (Jinx), @Sunshine1113 (Gwen), @LordZeus (Dan), @Noelle (Ryker), and @Hattable (Oliver).
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Thu Nov 19, 2015 7:11 am
LordZeus says...



Okay, I'm halfway through with mine. Just tell me when Mr.Neil announces the partners because the posts so far have shown conflicting times at when this happens. For example, @LeftyWriter posted that he announced them when the class had come out of the bus onto the ground when they reached their destination, while @HazelGrace16 posted that he announced them while they were on the bus, before they left the school. Clear this doubt for me please.





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Thu Nov 19, 2015 7:19 am
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Erm... When I wrote Layla's part I intended for it to be after they got off the bus but after looking back through the posts, it looks like most people are going with "on the bus". So, it's up to you but I guess it would be more consistent with others to have them assigned on the bus. ;)
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