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Thu Mar 12, 2015 8:05 pm
r4p17 says...



Well, I am in a bit of a tough position right now. I have plenty of time to post and all, but I don't know anything about this NPC at the observatory belonging to @TheWanderingWizard. I just need for him to post before I get back into the swing of things.
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 12:54 am
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;-; I had nothing to post about.
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 1:39 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



@15253, there are two discrepancies in your post. Firstly, Aaron is a female character. @Wolfare1 deliberately chose a male name because it is difficult enough for Aaron to keep the Exiles' respect despite her gender. When you do bring her gender into account, things become more complicated. (Basically, the Exiles are the opposites of the Callitrix.)

Secondly, the Empire doesn't have to ban trade with the Exiles, since the Exiles have been banned themselves, therefore everything related to them is illegal. Besides, no trader would be foolish enough to trade with the Exiles, since they'd likely be robbed and murdered. Blackmarket traders, however, would find the Exile settlement a dream come true. (Although, they wouldn't announce their goods to everyone - only the Exile traders themselves would do that.)

Nevertheless, thank you for making a post! The rest of us are still awaiting @TheWanderingWizard's post. By the way, he'll be making another challenge after submitting said post.
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 6:48 pm
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that what I was saying. The traders at the market are Exile traders (exile citizens that sell things they catch while hunting or mining.) Also, I don't remember specifying that Aaron was a boy but I shall check. I will change da other things to ;)
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Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:02 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



I apologize for my long absence, but have (and still am...) extremely busy with school and other activities. I can still say that my post is nearly complete, and will be up on Sunday (we're going camping Friday and Saturday), and hopefully I will post the challenge then as well. *runs off to complete my posts for my SBs and finish my homework at the same time*
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Fri Mar 27, 2015 9:11 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



*politely pokes* Uh, it's been a week? >.< I totally understand life getting in the way, but I would like to see how close you are to getting the next post finished, @TheWanderingWizard
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Fri Mar 27, 2015 9:14 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Oh, sorry @Wolfare1 and everyone else!! *blushes* My post is two thirds finished, and seeing as its (un)officially school holiday now, I will be able to finish everything I have to finish.
I apologize for all of this... *hides in corner*
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Fri Mar 27, 2015 9:36 pm
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I just realized, this post should actually be LONGER (hopes to write quicker now, but after I get some sleep)
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Tue Mar 31, 2015 4:55 pm
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Rydia says...



Hi, mind if I grab the second soldier?
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Tue Mar 31, 2015 5:25 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



@Wolfare1, @Wolfie36, @15253, and @r4p17, welcome the almighty administrator Rydia to our SB! She will be participating as a soldier for the Empire.
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Tue Mar 31, 2015 7:52 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



I have finally made a post!! And btw, both @Rydia AND @QueenAnne have now joined the SB, so... Full House! And this is maybe one of the best SB groups I could have asked for!
(I will create a Challenge shortly...)
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Tue Mar 31, 2015 7:56 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Oh, and @Rydia, as you can see, I just gave your character a nickname (which the common folk or lower soldiers call your character), thus your character is yours to create!
Also, @QueenAnne, you can either be one of the "champions" in Rydia's party, but with an ulterior motive, or you can be a soldier who snuck out of the Fortress on his/her own to track down and/or catch Jeremiah's party
(like I said, that is up to you, and I can't wait to see what you two surprise us with!)
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Tue Mar 31, 2015 8:11 pm
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Wait, wait, wait.
Can I be neither?
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Tue Mar 31, 2015 8:21 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Of course!! Whatever floats your boat, or hands a flagon to your dragon. Whatever passes your molasses, or bleaches your peaches. (I just wanted to rhyme)
You can be anything you want to be, as long as it isn't too OP, or any of the other no-no when creating a SB character.
Like I said, you two actually have a slight advantage, seeing as you can adjust your character to all the histories and story progressions we've already written.
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Tue Mar 31, 2015 8:24 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



The top statement (not the one with the rhyme) was what a noob oð SBing most likely would have chosen, but you two ar experienced SBers (I mean, th one is an admin for crying out loud)
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