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The King's Quest DT



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Mon Apr 22, 2013 3:59 pm
KeiPie says...



Ok sorry, I didn't know that some people weren't comfortable with the first person. Let's vote. I would like the whole SB to be in one POV. So please vote first or third person.
As for who goes next, thewritersdream is right, first come first serve.
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:01 pm
KeiPie says...



Hopkin I'll make sure to add your elf but please write your dwarf's profile in sentence structure (capitals at the beginning of sentences etc.) and complete sentences. When the SB starts I really don't want to see anything written this way. Thanks!
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:02 pm
Craz says...



I vote for third person.
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:36 pm
onedarkhorizon says...



Third person :)
  





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Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:38 pm
Skydreamer says...



I don't care either way. (will go with majority)
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I call it truth, faith, hope, life.


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Mon Apr 22, 2013 6:25 pm
Iggy says...



Er, KeiPie? Could you answer my question, please?
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 6:32 pm
KeiPie says...



Check the DT we're discussing it there.
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― Mark Twain


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Mon Apr 22, 2013 7:08 pm
Iggy says...



Third person.

(Sorry, I forgot about the DT. It seemed like majority of discussions were being posted in the SB itself.)
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 7:13 pm
Dakushau says...



Do we all have to be in one POV? Because I prefer to write more in first person. Of course, if we do have to all be in one POV I don't want everyone else to be uncomfortable so I'd just go with it.
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:17 pm
Hopkin says...



What if we went along with it? some people do first person, others third, I like third, and I know people who like first, although third is better for a group, just saying.
  





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Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:19 pm
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KeiPie wrote:Hopkin I'll make sure to add your elf but please write your dwarf's profile in sentence structure (capitals at the beginning of sentences etc.) and complete sentences. When the SB starts I really don't want to see anything written this way. Thanks!


Hey I'm sorry, thought you were going to start, I usually don't do that, I'm a smart writer ;) I'll do good~ :)
  





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Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:23 pm
KeiPie says...



Awesome! Just making sure!
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:26 pm
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Fine, you guys can write however you want just please make sure it somewhat joins in with the previous post. I enjoy writing first person too. I'll officially start this tomorrow!
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:42 pm
ladcat13 says...



Hey! This sounds cool, so I'm in, if you want me to?

Millions of miles from home
In the darkness before the dawn
In the swirling of this storm
When I'm rolling with the thunder
But bleed from thorns
Leave a light, a light on.
  





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Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:45 pm
ladcat13 says...



oh jeez I just realized that I cant. I'm sry, but i guess Ill have to cancel. It sounds interesting, though. wish i cud stick around :/

Millions of miles from home
In the darkness before the dawn
In the swirling of this storm
When I'm rolling with the thunder
But bleed from thorns
Leave a light, a light on.
  








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