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Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:01 pm
RedBird says...



Aria--sounds good. I guess they'll just meet in battle at some point and end in stalemate or something...
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 5:07 pm
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Elinor says...



This looks awesome. I'll read it in full when I get home. I'll try to get the first post up tonight!

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Mon Jun 03, 2013 5:10 pm
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8D

By the way, is there preferred person to write in, or is it up to us?
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:14 pm
StellaThomas says...



I would say it's up to you! Whichever suits your character better.

Also,we need to start thinking about immediate plot points such as:

-how do the two groups come together?
-when, where and why does the first battle take place, and how far into the SB? And what is the outcome?
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:19 pm
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One thing.. I wouldn't like to have everyone participating in every battle, and every battle being equally planned and fair for everyone. I mean, I guess they'd meet around as they do their hero/villain things, some of them might find out about each other's disguises as well.. I imagine the villains would be ready to outnumber a hero in some street anytime, and I'm fairly sure the heroes wouldn't mind doing the same to villains either. There should be individual fights occasionally, along with the ones in which everyone participates.
I'm pretty sure, having said that, that it didn't really have to be said - but still, I just wouldn't like to enter some sort of "group fight - time to cool down and think of strategies - group fight - time to cool down and think of strategies - group fight - etc." kind of scheme.. Because that sort of stops being as much fun after a while :p
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:21 pm
Rydia says...



I can't wait to read the first post! :D
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:52 pm
KingLucifer says...



Ready to go when you are Elinor.
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 8:47 pm
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Okay.

Going to finish filling out the relationship sheet later - everyone, make sure you do that.

Stella is right. In addition to thinking about what she mentioned, try to think about, in your posts, what the greatest conflict facing your character is and how it affects their relationships with others not only in the SB but in the important NPCs in their life.

How I want to start this:

Izzy plays violin and is in the University of Chicago orchestra. It's one night in late April, about a month before finals. It's warm. They are giving a concert, which all of the heroes are in attendance at, as is Izzy's adoptive sister Laurel. Izzy didn't think to bring her costume just in case. Her parents are in New York City on business. The heroes notice something is amiss when it starts to get very cold in the building. The other villains can start unleashing their attacks. The heroes disappear enough to change into their costume. They're caught off guard, because although they've fought the villains before, they've never fought them all at once. We'll battle, and Izzy and Laurel will both be taken hostage. It will be up to the other heroes to save them.

If there is anything else, please say it now. Otherwise I'll go ahead and post.

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Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:49 pm
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Yeah, yo Rydia, Lionel vs Jasmin in the opening, it'll be good right?
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:52 pm
RedBird says...



Stella, do you want the Valkyrie and Entwine to have a run in in this battle?
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:52 pm
Omni says...



Yeah...

My character pretty much hates all humans...

So...

Hey, she's somewhat friends/manipulator of Elissa!
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:55 pm
Sassafras says...



Sorry I haven't been much of a participant in this discussion. It's getting close to graduation, you know, I'm being spread thin. So can someone clue me in really quickly?
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:57 pm
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Well, we're going to be at a concert, then everything's going to get cold, then we all start fighting each other :P

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Mon Jun 03, 2013 10:41 pm
StellaThomas says...



Red, sure! Sounds good!
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 10:44 pm
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Okay, great!
And remember...A portkey can be any sort of harmless object...A football...or a dolphin.
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