Gosh it totally slipped my mind that I never replied—feel free to go first, @looseleaf—maybe you're already working on a post? I can find a time to draft a post tomorrow.
I have started one at the bottom of the WFP, but I'm not finished with it. I should have it done by tomorrow at noon CDT. Also, there will be a few spots to insert dialogue so once it's done and whenever you guys have the time, feel free to add some.
Sorry for the double post, but I'm nearly done in the WFP (I have to go do something for half an hour or so). There's two spots to fill in dialogue so far if anyone wants to do that.
I wouldn’t be able until later tonight, so if you need Caroline to say or do something please feel free to make up a short action or line of dialogue for her. If it’s inaccurate we can change it later, but we’ve been at this for long enough that I trust y’all.
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
So the way it left off was that they could either go to the cafe and debrief everything and make a plan (even though I know that was what we decided would end this week—oops) but if we decide to nix that idea the first person to post could just turn down Julian's offer to get lunch. If we do have the characters go to a cafe, it might make sense to collab on that post? So we might have to schedule a time.
Looks good, all! I like the idea of meeting at a cafe. I think at some point Caroline will reveal that she is also estranged from her family, but just have to think about what that revelation would look like. I feel like it's going to happen eventually.
My schedule this week is similar to this past week, I'm working Monday-Wednesday all day, working half days Thursday and Friday but then back to the theater. Let me know if there's a time that works and I'll try to make it.
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
I'm not available either of those times, but if you leave space for dialogue I'll add it. I'll also have free time during the day on Saturday and on Sunday evening to make a post if necessary, too.
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
I wrote a short beginning. (Pad 362) We would still have to insert the dialogues there. We can do it during a meeting where we are all together, or we can also write separately (X writes a question and everyone else gives an answer/theory) or gradually...
I could set up some questions and everyone answers, or one person then asks a question while giving the answer to a previous question.
The beginning looks great! I added in a bit of continuing dialogue. Since we're almost at the end of the week, it might work better just to fill in dialogue as needed? Also, where would we go from this, for the remaining posts this week? Are we jumping right into what they plan to do, or will there be a little lull in the action as they return to their respective lives before going into the plans next week?
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