Young Writers Society

Thanks so much, Mailice! You're a life-saver. I'm so sorry I couldn't do it, but I promise I can get a post in this week!

I’ll look and add my details later tonight.

Also for whatever reason I thought we had until Friday, but we actually have until Sunday so I think we’ll be fine.

I’ve been so busy but my schedule’s going to clear up, so @looseleaf I can post before or after you. Either way!

Sounds good! I added a couple lines of dialogue for Aloysius. Tell me if you think I should change any of them. :)

So far so good, looseleaf,

Just one thing: I don't think Hoover could just get into a speakeasy. What do you / the others think? Isn't it too conspicuous if a dog manages to get in?
What I meant by adding was that someone might mention him.

Yeah, you're probably right. I can rewrite it if that's ok with everyone!

Hi, I added some of Caroline's dialogue. Hopefully it all gels okay. Hopefully you can get this posted soon. I can try to do one tomorrow, maybe a shorter one that introduces HOG or something and then @looseleaf, you could go after me? Also, we decided HOG kind of looks like Rudy Valentino, right?

I'm thinking he and Caroline have the briefest of interactions - maybe even with no words exchanged.

Also I checked and with my additions we're up to 1324 - so I think we'll be able to get to the word count just fine.

Everything looks good so far. @Plume do you want to add more?

Liking this post by everybody means, I´m going to post it.

Yeah, I can add more soon!! I just had a lot to do yesterday!

Sorry for the double post - I just added some things, so I think we should be good to go! We're at 1,389 words, I think, but we might want to double-check before we post! Let me know if anything needs to be changed.

Also, just FYI - under the NPC category on the WFP, I've included the speakeasy staff I introduced in my post with small little descriptions and stuff, just so we can keep track of who's who!

It looks good! I changed Aloysius's Hoover thing so that the dog isn't inside the speakeasy.

Great! I´m going to post it then.

EDIT: posted!

Another edit: My holiday has been cancelled. So I'm here normally because I still have time off.

Awesome! I can go next, but I have some work I need to do today so it might not be until later tonight.

I might just have Caroline go to the bathroom where she runs into HOG.

Also, I found out I did get the part in the play, and it seems like rehearsals will be Tuesdays-Thursdays, so I could either be the first person or last to post into a given week depending on how things are going.

I hope we can stay in this for a while because I really like where things are going.

Posted! It's a bit on the shorter side at 548 words, but hopefully it works! I'm happy to add or change anything. @Plume and @looseleaf I look forward to seeing what you both write!

The post looks great, Elinor!! @looseleaf would you like to go next, or shall I?

I don't care either way! Whichever's easiest for you.