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Tue Mar 17, 2015 1:47 pm
TheSilverFox says...



Yay, I didn't sleep terribly last night! Of course, I didn't sleep all that well either. At least the prospect of the worst ending only bothered me for about......well, an hour, maybe? I call these things like I see them, and I say things turned out fine. Who needs sleep? I've got enough vigor to where it doesn't bother me. :P

Huh, so everybody loses? That sounds like my idea for a novel, except for the fact that most everyone is a villain, and most everyone is dead or in jail by the end of the story. Yes, that probably is the darkest piece of writing I have ever thought of making in my life. But who said I'm always happy? Nobody. :P.

I don't think I can say much more than that. XD. School's starting in about...oh...15 minutes, and it promises to be an interesting day today. Thank goodness Spring Break is during next week. It'll make this Algebra quiz less painful (and my Spanish quiz). XD.
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:26 pm
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Tortwag wrote:So yeah, New DT, so I though it would be appropriated to change Avatar now. Not to mention that it's a bit foreshadowing to an event that's going to happen to my dear Twinkiel. It saddens my heart that I even ever thought about doin' what I plan to do, but oh well.

@Tortwag, I don't much enjoy torturing my characters either, but it makes for an interesting story, and ultimately, that should be any writer's main goal. Yeah, Gabriel's candle, which previously shone so brightly, grows dimmer as the story progresses, much to Flurry and Riley's frustration. Unfortunately, there will come a time when it will be snuffed out completely...

As for double status effects in the Pokémon TCG, I once inflicted burning, poisoning, and confusion upon one of my opponent's cards. (Although, it may also have been inflicted upon one of mine... I can't remember.) Anyway, it's actually not that difficult. The most common combination is due to "Stun Poison", which paralyses and poisons.

@TheSilverFox, it took you ten minutes to write a post that short? O_o
(If you were being sarcastic, I totally missed it... :$ )

@Robusto, I think you should group all of the connected themes together in the same spoiler, since that would ensure ease of navigation. Here is an example of how the current list would look if you decide to accept my suggestion:

Soundtrack



Location-related themes
Spoiler! :



New Order-related themes



Group-related themes
Spoiler! :
Humons' theme: [insert Char's "From Where You Are" url here]

Mega Blastoise Battle: https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=6nMFLquJeCc

Groudon Battle: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xsz497IqoH0

Mega Venusaur Battle: [insert url here]



Zulu-related themes



Ren-related themes



Gabriel-related themes
Spoiler! :



Twinkiel-related themes
Spoiler! :
Twinkle Time (Twinkiel's theme): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8y_EyZ5H1nI

Devil's Lamb (Twinkiel's Planning Theme): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tn929-IAakw

War Paint (Twinkiel Battle Theme): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hdSyK5wutXg



Ending-related themes
Spoiler! :
No such thing as peace (The Final battle, Worst Ending): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SyLJ3MuQrs

The War's End (The Final battle, Neutral Ending): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZYa0A7s1ZII

Battle against Anger (The Final battle, Best ending): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uP1a2bZfcPw

Battle against Madness (The Final Battle, Best ending) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9IaoABxFf_Y

Battle against Despair (The Final Battle, Best ending) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkw1NG4CQ_I



I do not claim ownership of any of these songs. They are used for entertainment purposes only.
(More coming)


You'll see I updated the BBCode and added the other themes (that are present in the SB, not the previous DT) as well. Should you choose to accept my proposal, below is the coding for everything. (You literally just copy and paste the green text.)

Code: Select all
[center][bebas]Soundtrack[/bebas][/center]

Location-related themes
[spoiler]Terraria: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xweRl4LZlmo[/url]

Frontier Town: [insert url here]

Amity Village: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rd3jms3Bes4[/url]

Marsh of Light: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XuPJm2XQT0A[/url]

Marsh of Light (Dark Side): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=k6UvOfgDcME[/url]

Cut-throat Pass: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2K6N35UcoXA[/url]

Northern Plains: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qdbpMiZ1ajI[/url]

Frostpoint Village: [insert url here]

Sazandora Desert: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=W1LEd9BNGuE[/url]

Sandveil Town: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dkBPzrAtFzI[/url]

Sacred Forest: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2QcpBV9B4y0[/url]

Shrine of Safety: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3A08iczbZ-Y[/url]

Completely Safe Bunker: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GQ-eQOnlfzs[/url]

Radiance: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5gaa2adIafo[/url]

Life's End: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOQPKTw02dY[/url][/spoiler]


New Order-related themes
[spoiler]The New Order: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqpAhI-2MPM[/url]

Frost's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2UeA9Nus9Eg[/url]

Bloodmoon's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uYDT_Y6Jj5c[/url]

Hoopa's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ki0VOj7S2DA[/url]

Hoopa Battle (Normal and Minions): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lucD1KFUR5s[/url]

Hoopa Battle (Edge): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=viBGtqs0oow[/url]

Hoopa Battle (???): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYBpYH2DzvU[/url]

Arthur's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fBpIRi5Y4i4[/url]

Felicity's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Q1YHly_Mys[/url]

Alek's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AxchyP5HPKo[/url][/spoiler]


Group-related themes
[spoiler]Humons' theme: [insert Char's "From Where You Are" url here]

Mega Blastoise Battle: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=6nMFLquJeCc[/url]

Groudon Battle: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xsz497IqoH0[/url]

Mega Venusaur Battle: [insert url here][/spoiler]


Zulu-related themes
[spoiler]Zulu's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NytOZx5B4fM[/url]

Zulu's Sadness: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1U5eFvBKvGE[/url]

Zapdos Battle: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4F_T0LJIho[/url]

Cresselia's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YxCVFoXX71o[/url][/spoiler]


Ren-related themes
[spoiler]Ren's Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OVtZcKso-BA[/url]

Darkrai Battle: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=ihouKiRVD44[/url][/spoiler]


Gabriel-related themes
[spoiler]A Tortured Soul (Gabriel's Theme): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=m9gdlRyaeGM[/url]

A Past Remembered (Gabriel's Torment Theme): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=ZabdAMymuvs[/url][/spoiler]


Twinkiel-related themes
[spoiler]Twinkle Time (Twinkiel's theme): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8y_EyZ5H1nI[/url]

Devil's Lamb (Twinkiel's Planning Theme):  [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tn929-IAakw[/url]

War Paint (Twinkiel Battle Theme): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hdSyK5wutXg[/url][/spoiler]


Ending-related themes
[spoiler]No such thing as peace (The Final battle, Worst Ending): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SyLJ3MuQrs[/url]

The War's End (The Final battle, Neutral Ending): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZYa0A7s1ZII[/url]

Battle against Anger (The Final battle, Best ending): [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uP1a2bZfcPw[/url]

Battle against Madness (The Final Battle, Best ending) [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9IaoABxFf_Y[/url]

Battle against Despair (The Final Battle, Best ending) [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkw1NG4CQ_I[/url][/spoiler]


I do not claim ownership of any of these songs. They are used for entertainment purposes only.
(More coming)


And there isn't anything wrong with your worst ending theme, but if you really want a different one, I suppose I could provide a few more options.

1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q6rRMyQpdTg
2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jy1bQIk0f0w&list=PLQmdgbQBRnIcMck738CMcWHxYz1Zu8c7n&index=25 ← I prefer this one.
3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g_6TKPkQu2Q ← this one is vocal.


@Charizard821, @Buggiedude2340, and @TheSilverFox, your characters are currently without themes, and since the previous DT's links no longer work, you'll have to find them on your own again.
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 8:47 pm
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Well, apparently, I can't brag about anything now. XD. My lack of sleeping is starting to catch up to me, and I'm driving myself up a wall. Hooray for another day of mayhem that can only occur within my imagination (i.e. trying to figure out what the heck I'm going to be doing for the next few days and what I just learned and what's been happening and....). :P. I'm going to quite bragging about anything - they're not well-founded enough, and I always end up eating my words.

Anyways....(oh great, nosebleed. What a wonderful day for me.)

The truth of the matter is the fact that I haven't created any sort of a theme for Aegeas, and I will have to resolve that problem that shortly. I have an idea for at least three different themes, and I'm trying to sort out a bunch of songs I have in mind for any other themes (if possible.) Any plans for my character? None in particular, though I'm so engrossed in studying Norse mythology all I can think of is the Einherjar, Ragnarok, and Valhalla. Yes, it might be a hint to something, but I won't tell you what it is. I'm just a little.....ummm, temperamental? Yeah, that's it. Temperamental, right now. Shifting between happy and sad and happy and angry and so forth. It's about as shifting as the weather here, which went from 78 Fahrenheit to 38 Fahrenheit in the space of about 18-20 hours. Worst heat/cold spell ever. XD

This concludes my perfectly random conversation. Yes, this is just about how I talk in a normal conversation with my friends/family (with some exceptions). I'm free for the rest of the day! :D. My schoolwork was all too easy. XD.
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a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

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Tue Mar 17, 2015 9:38 pm
Ventomology says...



Would it be weird to start putting up arbitrary back story posts for Flurry? Her story would be told best in great detail, and posts have been slow lately.
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 10:15 pm
Robusto says...



Thanks for organizing all that music @AstralHunter. (And for adding the ones I missed.)
I actually found the song I was looking for the worst ending. It's updated.





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Tue Mar 17, 2015 10:16 pm
Robusto says...



Though that may change once I hear Tortwag's suggestion. (Sorry Astral, but I was looking more for battle themes. Yours worked more for after the battle of the worst ending.)





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Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:32 pm
Charizard821 says...



@AstralHunter, I know what you mean! Coming from the guy who types up those ginormous posts in 15 minutes, you'd think it would have taken @TheSilverFox much less time to type that DT post!

@Tortwag: "another fillet's comin'". That made my day again. XD

Hmm... Riley's theme lost to time? I thought about reposting it, but I feel it should be updated due to Riley's slight improvements in his ability to trust. Perhaps I'll snag another Dream Team theme. (Rhyming for the win.) I wonder if anybody chose the Final Antasma Battle theme for anything.





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Wed Mar 18, 2015 4:10 pm
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go for it @Buggiedude2340! I'll be posting soon.
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Wed Mar 18, 2015 4:15 pm
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@Robusto Sorry, I'm late! Here come the music choices!
Spoiler! :
1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sfr6Oy0Unzg
(One of my all time favorites)

2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcA-9uX3nKM
(Ditto, though for very different reasons)

3: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/158028
(fanmade masterpiece, definitely apocalyptic)

4: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YDeuBgp9NhY
(...Don't even get me started on that one... Legendary moment right there)

5: (I couldn't resist, because it's amazin') https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ifelo1TbPAA



So there you have it, Robusto! Choose your character :D GOod luck though, 'cause all of them are great in my book. Especially that last one. Which I recommend strongly. Oh, that reminds me, you forogt the Log Horizon theme for epic moments!
Spoiler! :
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@Charizard821 ...*sigh* gLad it made your day I guess T_T But seriously it's difficult to write on my phone while in the bus, so yeah. That'll happen as long as I do it. And the Final Antasma battle was used. Remember when we fought Darkrai ?
@TheSilverFox well that was random. Do get some rest and write stuff about Aegeas! Though... I kinda intend to write a Twinkiel post first, so i hope you can wait :3
@Buggiedude2340 GO FOR IT :D
@AstralHunter I'm likin' Black Earth. That guy doesn't play piano. HE IS the piano. But yeah Smaug music wins in your case, though the themes I've chosen are more combat/apocalyptic-oriented. And kinda more fast-paced, too. And... From different types of music.
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Wed Mar 18, 2015 5:44 pm
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Guess who's getting caught up on posts right now? That's right. C`est moi! AND I'm FINALLY POSTING THE BATTLE TODAY! I decided to stop putting it off.

In honour of the new DT, a new poll. This one's quite simple. Choose your favourite: Pokémon Red or Pokémon Blue? And to add to it, as this one is so simple, we'll have TWO polls! The other is this: Choose your favourite: Mario or Luigi? Remember guys, reasons why! They make for good discussion. :)





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Wed Mar 18, 2015 5:50 pm
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I am double-posting for the sake of repelling distraction. ;)

I choose Pokémon Blue. Though I've never played either of the originals myself, blue is my favourite colour, AND let's face it, Blastoise won the Battle Royale Death Battle. So all you Charizard fans, get outta here. XD

I choose Luigi. I could argue this point for days on end but Luigi is the cooler brother. He has nothing but love for Mario and respect for everyone else. He's shy and quiet, but powerful. And though he may be scared, he almost always finds the courage to face his fears, which in my opinion, is bolder than facing something fearlessly. (Not to mention the fact that Mario has ASPD, is a womaniser and an animal abuser. But hey, that's just a theory. :) )





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Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:50 pm
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@Charizard821 Oh? Did you catch up to Hoopa's post? Or to Arthur's?

That aside... Uhh... I'd say Blue, because Blastoise's in the cardright. And although both Charizard and Blastoise are reptiles, which makes me automatically love them both, I kinda prefer my reptiles when:
-They have a shell;
-they are linked to technology in someway. And as epic as dragons can be... A giant turtle with water canons on its back was enough for me.
As for the second poll, I prefer Luigi. The first reason is because, bein' the little brother, I always identified myself more to Luigi than Mario (despite enjoyin' both characters), and the first time I used him (SuperStar Saga), he could control freakin' electricity. Which I found much more interesting than the usual, overused fire power (<-- 8 years old logic).
And finally because Luigi's an actual coward who tries to overcome his fears. I find that much more interesting than a guy who has pretty much no fears at all. I even prefered King Boo to Bowser back then.

There! Next poll :D
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Wed Mar 18, 2015 10:00 pm
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red, their has been a legend that hasn't been disproved yet (to my knowledge) That the people who get red instead of blue have to, in order to fully beat the game, collect all the legendary birds as well as beat the game itself.

Also, luigi because he has a better mustache and because Mario is a psychopath >:3
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Wed Mar 18, 2015 10:16 pm
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@Verser I got both versions, and as far as I know, you gotta do that in both. And complete the Pokedex.

...Oh, THAT Game Theory about Mario bein' a psycho. Right. Should that really be taken into account here? after all, it was just a theory... (I'll let you finish the line)
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Wed Mar 18, 2015 11:24 pm
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@AstralHunter, @Charizard821: Yes, it did take me that long to write that small post, and that short of a time to write that large post. It makes no sense, but that's how I work. :P. It all depends on what I am attempting to write, and what I'm trying to do. If I find it hard to say something (like right now, for instance), it takes me longer to write a post. If I find it easier to say something, I'm usually writing at a very fast pace.

"Another fillet's coming?" Cool! I caught a fish once, but I ate that a long time ago. :P.

@Tortwag: Wait? WAIT!? :evil:

*[insert creepy music here]*


I'm lazy, so sure. :P I feel a lot more energized than I did 24 hours ago, so I'm feeling fine (except for those stomach cramps that I keep getting). I think I can wait for now - in the meantime, I'll be wondering about school and trying to improve my winning percentage in Solitaire (8.5% doesn't cut it.)

@Buggiedude2340, @Charizard821: Go for it! I'm excited to see what you create. :D.

@Charizard821 (I'm tagging you repeatedly on purpose for notifying me of my slow writing pace. XD.): When I saw your poll, I already knew the choices I was going to make, and I'm surprised and happy that most everybody else picked the same options as I did:

Pokémon Blue trumps Pokémon Red, no question. Everybody knows Fire-types have a double weakness to Water-types. I never played the games either, but I have a Blastoise that is absolutely awesome. It serves as one of the member of my primary team in Pokémon X, can be Mega-evolved, and knows a great moveset (Water Pulse, Dark Pulse, Ice Beam, and Skull Bash.) It's probably one of my most favorite Pokémon ever - you should see what happens when my opponent is confused thanks to Water Pulse. Blue also happens to be my favorite color, so it's obvious as to my choice. That, and I also like the character. He's hilarious, somewhat annoying, and sometimes obnoxious (so I was happy when someone in Lumiose City mentioned him.) He's probably my second favorite rival in the main series Pokémon games, behind Silver.

Between Mario and Luigi, I say Luigi. Mario's always seemed bland to me, because he never really has any definable personality traits. He's just the silent-hero kind of guy, afraid of nothing and having no real advantages in anything. An "all-around character," if you will. After having seen a lot of games featuring him, I think that I like his optimism, but he doesn't have a personality to boot. Luigi, on the other hand, has an interesting personality. He's shy, not really outgoing, and terrified of ghosts. It was fun playing Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon and watching him be scared of just about everything he sees in the intro. :P. Luigi has some form of a personality, and there's no doubt about it - when the time comes, he can be as good a hero as his brother. He's fun, enjoyable, and his moveset in SSB4 is hilarious, particularly when he runs into people with his attacks. That and the Poltergust is so awesome. XD. He has his own skillset, personality, fears, likenesses, and I like him a lot more than Mario.

Oh, and I've been doing this: :smt024 :for the past 23(4) minutes. Yeah, it takes me a while. So what? :P
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senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

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