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Sorry for taking so long Let me know if anything needs to be changed!

Questions about this Ashton guy - is it a simple coincidence that he and Cole share the same first name? And will he be coming to the cabin too? (I'm kind of uncertain about what his purpose is.)

Great post, @Wolfie36!

One minor inconsistency I noticed, though, was that Riley is unconscious at this point, having been knocked out with a tranquilizer dart.

Yeah, it's a coincidence that their names are the same. I'm not sure if @Steggy had a purpose in mind for Ashton, but now he's sort of "involved". He's the first one to find out about the Animorphers and it's probably something Emma needs to deal with/explain to him now that he knows she's a part of this.

Ooh, forgot about that. Thanks!

I should be able to officially come back to the SB every other weekend from now on. My schedule just totally cleared up. I haven't read the last few posts but I'm thinking about making Gwen finally change (I don't think she has yet?) I'm thinking about making the cause of her not changing being a genetic abnormality that the morphing tech had to slowly "fix" before she could morph. She should fairly quickly become like everyone else.

Posted @LeftyWriter I mentioned Layla quite a bit. Please tell me if you want me to change anything! (The argument I mentioned at the end was just something that came to me. I can edit it out if you want.)

@Sunshine1113

That's awesome news, Sunny! It's great to have you back!

At this point, Gwen as not changed and pretty much thinks the chairs didn't work on her (or at least that's sort of how it's been portrayed up until this point). And the genetic abnormality sounds like an awesome explanation as to why she hasn't morphed yet.

Let me know if you'd like help getting caught up on anything you've missed.

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@LordZeus the argument you mentioned at the end is probably fine. It's probably up to whoever posts next (and if they're picking up where you left off) as to whether or not they'd like to put an argument in their post.

So...who's posting next?

Characters who still need to be posted for this round are:

Michael, Layla, Emma, Gwen?, Neon, Riley, and Charlotte.

I can post next if people want me to, but I thought I should try to spread my posts out a bit. I also thought I'd hold off on posting for Riley as long as I could in case Fantasy comes back before the round is over.

FINALLY BACK!!! Did I miss anything?

I may need a recap of what is happening thus far, so I can write Michael's part sometime this week or weekend.

FANTY!!! *tackles*

The storybook has been pretty slow, so you haven't missed too much. I never posted for Riley, so you can take her back over without having to incorporate anything I did. If you both (@TheFantasy14 and @Steggy) need a recap, I posted one on the last DT page, six posts down.

Also, I'm not sure what the last storybook posts you guys read were, but this round started with Cole's post, three posts up from the bottom on page 4.

Let me know if you have any questions. And welcome back, Fanty!

That's the second time tonight someone's given me a virtual tackle.

*tackles Fanty*

Oops. Hope all those virtual tackle bruises will heal soon. o.o

is there anything specific we're arguing about? (My post is during the ride but I don't want to blunder anything.)

I don't think @LordZeus had anything specific in mind, right?

I suppose they could be arguing about something as serious as who was shooting at them/who bombed the lab or it could be something as silly as "There's ten of us and only four beds."

Any thoughts, LordZeus?