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Hi Quill! Each poem definitely portrays a lot of emotion! They feel very emotionally cohesive though I love that you are exploring different formattings and images along the way.
My favorite so far was "the nature of your love"
ah that comparison is crushing and poetic and pulls at the heart strings. <3
You had some super interesting form choices in "I am, you are, we will never" that I thought was really thoughtfully done as well. You're doing fabulously so far - and I am looking forward to continuing to follow your thread!
My favorite so far was "the nature of your love"
I can't breathe in the deep blue ocean
but I wonder if I really want to
And yet I keep swimming for something
Your disappointed eyes as I sink in the sea of your expectations
I wouldn't want to drown and let you down again
ah that comparison is crushing and poetic and pulls at the heart strings. <3
You had some super interesting form choices in "I am, you are, we will never" that I thought was really thoughtfully done as well. You're doing fabulously so far - and I am looking forward to continuing to follow your thread!
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