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A girl called February



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Mon Mar 04, 2024 2:43 pm
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A girl called February



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Goals:
Write Min. 30 13 Poems
Make my first NaPo an unforgettable blast ofc.
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Wed Mar 20, 2024 11:09 pm
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AmayaStatham wrote:#ShareYourNapoAvatar

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Thu Mar 21, 2024 7:13 pm
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AmayaStatham wrote:#IceCreamChallenge #NaPo2024 #CountDownToNaPo

I've written 7 poems last year and one already for 2024. Out of all of them, I like Cloud Members the best.

This poem is inspired by Zayn Malik, one of my favourite singers and his songs. I had a lot of fun writing this one, also because it's written for two of the characters of my novel, MaryAnna. To one of my many treasures! 🤩

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Thu Mar 21, 2024 7:32 pm
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Pre-NaPo: March is Marchin' towards April



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Fri Mar 22, 2024 7:22 am
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I love this theme so much! This looks amazing, really :) I love the poem you posted today too. Ahh, it all looks awesome! Can't wait!
”Life can only be understood backward, but it must be lived forwards (so you might as well do Duolingo ).”


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Then AilahEvelynMae
and is now EllieMae
  





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Fri Mar 22, 2024 1:30 pm
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Sat Mar 30, 2024 11:55 pm
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Potential Titles

AGCF - I was thinking of using every first letter of my title: A Girl Called February

After G… C… F…. (need to fill in yet)
Adidas, Gucci, Chanell & FCUK
Airfryed Golden Chicken Fingers
Any Gem Can Fly
Always Ginger Cotton Floss
A Glowing Candle Fades
Annoying Guys, Cans, Forks
Amazing Girlfriends Can Fail
All Great Consciousnesses Forgotten
A Good Chocolate Frosting

Without AGCF
Princess called February
Unwrite Everything Without Ctrl Z
Sayings Without Meaning
Writing Poetry, Not A Crime
  





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Mon Apr 01, 2024 6:44 pm
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1. | All Great Consciousnesses Forgotten
Inspo: 1| Sit Still Look Pretty - Daya

Whispers of great consciousnesses,
Were forgotten in the sea time

My grandmother fled,
Thus she joined the deleted ones

My mother and elder sister,
Escaped too in search of
Space to breathe

A way out of the cage,
A challenge to their one way
life as a princess with puzzles,
Books, fencing skills and

The most beautiful thing yet:
The call of poetry

Through the grass they ran
Free as a birds
As leaves in wind
And as fish in the ocean

Yet Their husbands
turned blind eyes,
Looking for replacements
In “Sit Still Look Pretties”

Great consciousnesses
Oh so wise
Rise not in cages
But truly live in
field of flowers

Sadly, time has to cast
Its blanket of future

And so they were forgotten
In the blink of an eye
Gone with time itself

Forever breathing
And living.

~ Princess February
  





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Mon Apr 01, 2024 11:24 pm
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Hey Amaya! This was an interesting poem! The story it tells had me fascinated, wanting to find out what happened to the mother, sister and grandmother now that they were "gone with time itself". I like your take on the themes of freedom and "consciousness", too.
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Mon Apr 01, 2024 11:58 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Spoiler! :
Looking for replacements
In “Sit Still Look Pretties”


These lines. Phenomenal. I love them. This whole poem is so good.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  








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