Hello Hello, I hope you enjoying your day and don't mind me poping in with a review. The art is Nice and makes the writing pop without being distracting as a whole. On top of that, the way it is laid out helps with the flow and keeps the readers' eyes on the right path.
As for the writing itself, this is a very solid piece that plays with a relatable theme. I am sure all of us wish time could slow down as well as mourn the past in some way. You can feel an almost bitter-sweet mood carry through the words in a very concise way. Although I am not the best with rhyme schemes I do enjoy how it is used here.
Overall keep it even if it feels like time goes too fast and remember to drink water.
Points: 2601
Reviews: 35
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