veer! I love how emotive your poetry is, even with how short and sweet it is. You pack a lot of feeling into just a couple of lines and I’m here for it. My favorite has been your first poem, since it has such a potent longing-ness to it. I also love the starry night vibe of it, haha. I look forward to reading more!
the past will define us, and the future is still a while away but the memories of our past will still come out to play. for better or for worse, while they'll be here to stay, it's comforting to know we've made it through all of our worst days.
"Love is the name for our pursuit of wholeness, for our desire to be complete."
i hate how quickly the warmth of a cup of coffee fades- yet i cherish the small few moments of the heat in my palms. the smoke on my face. the burning inside me as it goes down after each sip.
it's the simplest reminder i have to enjoy the moment while it is still there, not after it has left.
"Love is the name for our pursuit of wholeness, for our desire to be complete."
even more than the feeling was the thrill of thinking “maybe i made it.” thinking maybe it would last, because the fear of losing something you waited so long to get was stronger than the reality you fought to repress that it was no longer even worth holding on to.
"Love is the name for our pursuit of wholeness, for our desire to be complete."
veeren!! I am in awe, you manage to convey so much emotion in your words, just wow <33 I love the vibe/aesthetic of all of them too, this is just stunning. And the background track is great to listen to when you're reading through these! Awesome job, you're doing amazing this NaPo :')
"silv is obsessed with heists" ~Omni
"silv why didn't you tell me you were obsessed with heists I thought we were friends" ~Ace
"y’all we outnumber silver let’s overthrow her >:]" ~winter
lonely and loveless. how many lessons leave us longing or losing sleep unpacking leftover feelings we thought we lost a long time ago- living in a world full of liars disguised as lovers that we simply have to tolerate if we’d like to find our sanity we swore we lost a long time ago.
"Love is the name for our pursuit of wholeness, for our desire to be complete."
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