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An Ocean of Poems



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Tue Apr 01, 2014 3:14 pm
WindSailor says...



I will try and attempt NaPoWriMo. This is my first time, so do not expect much.

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Wed Apr 02, 2014 12:04 am
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The Road of the Cross
Spoiler! :
I did this one quite quickly, so it isn't very good quality


I raise a white flag to be free
From the sin that has infected me.
I lift my eyes up to Heaven
And understand the grace that He has given.

I follow the road of the cross.
Carrying it, I follow no matter what the cost.
Foolish to some, I still continue on
Knowing that this is not where I belong.

Heaven awaits as a beautiful reward
And that is what I am striving for.
At the end of the race I will see
The beauty and splendor of Christ's majesty
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Life

From the start our lives
Were insignificant, small
They end no different.
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Tue Apr 08, 2014 8:46 pm
Audy says...



Road - smooth rhymes!
Life - maybe instead of "small" you can say "though" so you have a smoother transition(?) but yay for haikus! Well done ^^ I want to see more of your poems :O still lots of time to catch up!
  








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