Really liked that last chunk of poem 9 with the bird/noah allusion and also poem 7 !!! wow! that was a really vivid poem, the image of stapling your skin to places so people know you're there -> is just so gory, but also really makes an impression with that metaphor - you're really good at closing poems up too, which is not always easy.
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
Wow, your poems are amazing, ella! I'm loving the imagery you've woven into each of your poems. #7 is especially deep. I could almost hear my heart clench when I started reading. #10 is really cute, by the way! It has beautiful description. I'm hoping to see more from you even though it's the second last day of NaPo, heh.
Spend your days thinking about things that are good and true and beautiful and noble, and you will become good and true and beautiful and noble. — Matthew Kelly
