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Cuckoos and Chalk Marks



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Tue Jun 14, 2022 1:08 am
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"I'm an elf!"
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Tue Jun 14, 2022 1:20 am
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Now the crystals glowed again.

"The crystals glow when we're telling the truth," I said, staring right at the one closest to me as it glowed again, "and the ground shakes when we lie."
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The crystals glowed for that statement as well. "Excellent!" Sorenson said, grinning. "So...how do we get out, then?"
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"...Good question," I replied. I scanned the room and ignored how the crystals glowed again when I made that comment. "I don't see a door."

Another glow.

"Maybe this is like the hallway we were just in," I guessed. "We have to wait here for awhile until a door appears. We didn't see the one in the last hallway until we were right in front of it."

The crystals glowed bright to all of that.
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Tue Jun 14, 2022 1:36 pm
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Sorenson wrinkled his nose. "I hate waiting." The crystals glowed, and he sighed. "Are there any comfy seats around here or do we have to sit on boulders?"
"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin

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Wed Jun 15, 2022 1:28 am
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Already knowing the answer, I replied with, "There's just boulders."

Surprising probably no one, the crystals glowed again. I eyed our selection of rock seats and settled on one just a few feet away from me. It would be uncomfortable after awhile, but it was a good place for now. I walked over to it and sat down atop the somewhat flat top.
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Wed Jun 15, 2022 2:51 am
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Sorenson sat down on one nearby. "So....we're in a bit of a pickle, aren't we?"
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"Looks like it," I said. I barely paid attention to the glowing of the crystals around us now. They were just going to be an annoying side thing while we waited for this room to throw its worst at us. It was frustrating when we didn't know why they were glowing or why the ground was shaking, but it would just be how things were now.

...Unless I used it to interrogate Sorenson. I still didn't know much about him, now that I thought about it.

I kept the same bored posture and innocently asked, "So, earlier. When we were talking about my...master, you mentioned that you thought a lot of victims started out admiring their parents or masters. What made you think that?"
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"Oh, you know." He waved a hand. "Personal experience." The crystals glowed.
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Tue Jun 21, 2022 1:48 pm
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Well that was frustratingly vague.

It was also entirely on me, since that was how he had replied the first time I had asked a slightly different version of that question.

"As the victim, parent, or master?" I asked. Maybe that would get him to be more specific.
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Tue Jun 21, 2022 1:49 pm
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Sorenson chuckled. "Oh, I see what you're trying to do. That's not fair, not fair at all."
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Tue Jun 21, 2022 1:57 pm
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The crystals decided to glow then, but I decided to ignore them.

I smirked.

"I just see it as taking advantage of the situation," I said. The crystals glowed again. "It's fair enough to me."

The crystals kept glowing, even though what I said completely contradicted what they had just glowed to in Sorenson's response. Maybe it was based more on what you thought was the truth, and not just something that was absolutely fact.
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Tue Jun 21, 2022 1:59 pm
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"And what's your plan if I decide not to answer, hm?"
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Tue Jun 21, 2022 2:02 pm
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I opened my mouth to answer, then faltered. I didn't have an answer for that.

"That's for you to find out," I finally settled on. The crystals glowed again, although the glow was more unsteady—like they weren't really sure that counted as a truth, but also knew it wasn't really a lie.
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Tue Jun 21, 2022 2:06 pm
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Sorenson studied the crystals and grinned. "This ought to be fun. Alright then, I'll not be answering that one."
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A true poet does not bother to be poetical. Nor does a nursery gardener scent his roses.
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