Hey Meg. Would you be available to review my edited chapter 1( link: What Could Not Be (Chapter 1) *EDITED*). It would be great if you could just to see if ive made a big improvement from the original.
I have a multi-part short story that I'd like reviewed ^~^ I'd definitely like the second part done, but if you aren't too busy could you also do the first one?
I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live? — Homer Simpson
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