Young Writers Society

I have a couple chapters of a story and haven't gotten any reviews yet. I would really appreciate it if you would review mine. Let me know if you have anything you would like me to review. It takes till chapter 3 or 4 for the fantasy aspects to kick in and I will get those up as soon as I have enough points.
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Ok. Sure. Do you want all the chapters reviewed or just the first one? And can you re-try the link? It isn't working.

If you have time for both it would be apreciated, but you can just do one
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Okay. I'll get it done sometime next week. Going on vacation.

Alrigthy then. Thanks

This song of mine has no reviews and that makes me sad.
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I will do it...later.

Will you please review my 4 1/2 chapters of my book The war of night and day fantacy romance work.php?id=96193

All reviews are done. Stevie, if you want me to review all you're chapters, it'll take a while.

ok thanks for the heads up. ps can u review the story not my grammer and spelling i know its bad.

Sure thing.

Sevie: Will review the remaining three chapters soon.

More reviews welcome~!

Hey Pix,
could you take a look at this work.php?id=96765....it's kind of a book review and I'm confused to where it stands.
Thanks, appreciate it a lot

work.php?id=95601 please and if you need to read the other parts just let me know and I will give you links to them.