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Thu Nov 12, 2015 2:34 am

Lightsong says...

Link: You are the Reason I Died
Title: You are the Reason I Died
Media: Short Story
Genre: Dramatic, Teen Fiction (I guess)
Additional note: This story has some slightly explicit sexual details, so if you aren't comfortable with that, you can refuse to review it. I don't mind.

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:55 am

Eros says...

Please will you review my work :
A request for a review... ~Eros
NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me This chapter 2 of my novel... You may read chapter 1 also, before reading this chapter...
It has got only 1 review and is still lying lying n the green room...

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Mon Nov 16, 2015 2:08 pm

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Carlito says...

All caught up and ready for more!

It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

Ask a Therapist!
I want to beta read your novel!

Ask me anything. Talk to me about anything. Seriously. My PM box is always open <3

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Thu Nov 19, 2015 10:46 pm

artybirdy says...

Hello! I'd love it if you could review one of my short stories:
1. Broken Trust | Unedited
2. Divorce: A Cultural Stigma
Thank you!

[center]Previously known as ArtStyx[/center]

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Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:17 am

Pretzelstick says...

Heya Carlito, I would really love to get your feedback on my newly published short story, which I am planning to turning into a novella maybe someday. Any critiques would be appreciated, as this is a very rough draft. Thanks!
Test of Freedom

A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once
~George R. Martin
Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw

got yws?

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Tue Nov 24, 2015 7:13 am

felistia says...

Hi Felistia here. I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. It is a fantasy and action\adventure novel, but is also a loose fan fiction on the books Wings of Fire. I would love if you could follow the story chapter by chapter.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445

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Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:15 am

Carlito says...

Caught up and ready for more!

@felistia - it will take me a little while to get through all of it, but I'm on it!

It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

Ask a Therapist!
I want to beta read your novel!

Ask me anything. Talk to me about anything. Seriously. My PM box is always open <3

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Fri Nov 27, 2015 7:50 am

Lightsong says...

Please review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 6.1]! As an intermission chapter, the focus is on Flaxen's light companion, a guy Merah found in school who could run faster than human could.

Thank you!

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:04 pm

Carlito says...

Re-open! Please note that I am not currently accepting full manuscripts or novel following right now.
@felistia & @Lightsong - I haven't forgotten about you guys and I will be getting all caught up on your novels very soon! Thank you for being patient

It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

Ask a Therapist!
I want to beta read your novel!

Ask me anything. Talk to me about anything. Seriously. My PM box is always open <3

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Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:14 pm

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Lightsong says...

It's fine, it's fine! Take your time - I don't want you to feel like I'm burdening you. I understand your situation since you're following many novels.

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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Sun Jan 24, 2016 12:05 am

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felistia says...

Don't sweat it.

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Mon Feb 01, 2016 12:16 pm

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Sins says...

Carlitooooo (that's what your name sounds like in my head btw)

Just wondering, could you take a look at this novel I'm re-posting? Would be super swell, and muchly appreciated!

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

No rush or anything of the sorts, of course. Please and thank you

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Thu Feb 04, 2016 3:48 am

Carlito says...

Ready for more!

It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

Ask a Therapist!
I want to beta read your novel!

Ask me anything. Talk to me about anything. Seriously. My PM box is always open <3

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Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:16 am

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Dreamworx95 says...

Hey Carlito, first I want to say sorry that our critique correspondence didn't work out a few months ago! Your critiques were really helpful but I ended up moving onto other projects. That being said, I'd love to have a critique from you on a new novel I just started. It's a medieval fantasy genre, which I hope you will like. Here is the first chapter: Everlasting - Chapter 1: Raiders

Can't wait to hear from you.

PM me if you want me to review anything of yours.

-Dream

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http://clamor-journal.com/clamor-2015/2015-prose/stew/
http://clamor-journal.com/breakdown/
http://clamor-journal.com/fingertips/

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Sat Feb 06, 2016 6:18 pm

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Lightsong says...

Hey ya! Please review Ruby of Revenge [Part 1] for me. :3 Thanks!

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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