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Sat Apr 28, 2012 10:11 am
guineapiggirl says...



Hello.
I actually quite enjoy writing reviews and so I'll review your work for free.
Will review:
Fantasy
Historical
Short stories
Poems (of any sort)
Romance (but I might be rather mean)
Novels (will read first chapter and decide if I want to read on. If not, I'll tell you why and try again if you change it.)

Will not review:
Science-fiction
Ratings over 12 (I'm quite young and innocent)

Thankyou :D

P.S. Anyone fancy telling me how I can make a folder (?) for my novel so I can upload it?
  





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Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:25 pm
DudeMcGuy says...



At the very top of the page (when you've logged in) you will see "username", "Dashboard", and "Add new work." It's the third option.

You paste your writing into the message and then you submit it.
You can edit by going to Browse>> View mine
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Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:50 am
guineapiggirl says...



Thankyou!
  





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Wed May 02, 2012 5:01 am
DudeMcGuy says...



Hello again GPGirl.

You said you enjoyed my previous work, so here is Ch.1:
(Part 1) work.php?id=95055

(Part 2) work.php?id=95059

It takes place in a different time/setting than the prologue I wrote earlier, so be prepared for that. It also uses a few flashbacks. Let me know what you think!
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Tue May 08, 2012 7:01 pm
guineapiggirl says...



Sorry it's been so long- your review's coming now!
  








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