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Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:42 am
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emilybrodo says...



Hey guys! I know that reviewing people makes you a better writer so I thought I'd try this out.

I'd prefer to review young teenagers work and under simply because I have not yet reached the complexity of an adults brain. Although if you are extremely keen on a young teens view of your work then I'll review.
My reviews may be short and sweet or long depending on how big your piece of work is and so on.

I will review:
-Poems
-Short stories
-Novels
-scripts-I have some experience in scripts but be weary of my reviews
-Art and photography although I am not as clear on these as I am with writing

Please be patient if I take my time to review.
My reviews:
I'll point out any errors you may have.
I'll point out any other weird stuff that may or may not be an error.
I'll say how you can make your work better and give an example.
I'll point out what I didn't like and why.
I'll point out what I love.
I'll give you tips for your writing in the future.
I'll tell you what you need to do in general to make your piece better.
I try to be as least harsh as possible, if not, I'll be not harsh at all.

And guys, please be patient. If my reviews suck I am having a few severe brain issues but I am working on it.

Post away!!!
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

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Mon Mar 05, 2012 4:07 pm
lili024 says...



Can you please review this. thank you! :D
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Tue Mar 06, 2012 3:03 am
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emilybrodo says...



Done! Sorry for the length Lili of the review! Who's next?
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

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Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:46 pm
xXTheBlackSheepXx says...



Would you mind looking at some of my art? I could use a few extra opinions x)
viewtopic.php?f=27&t=93429
Thanks in advance!
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The good news is we can't make any mistakes.
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Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:43 pm
thebookworm says...



Could you look at my short story? work.php?id=93844 And my poem? work.php?id=93847
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
  





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Thu Mar 08, 2012 6:05 am
emilybrodo says...



Done! Sorry it took so long, had a few assignments to deal with. Next please!
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

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Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:08 am
emilybrodo says...



This post is looking lonely, requests guys! XD
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

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Sun Mar 18, 2012 7:24 am
emilybrodo says...



This thread is dying!
Someone resuscitate it! Quick!
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

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Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:15 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Hey, would you mind reviewing the prologue to my novel? I've had it revised and need some feedback on this version.
work.php?id=94143
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:30 pm
xxFleetingEternity says...



Would you mind reviewing either this:
youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94164

this:
youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93728

or this?:
youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93320

Thanks for any of the three that you review.
My silence is my sound...
XxXxX
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Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:20 am
emilybrodo says...



Finished yours UpandOut, moving on to xxFleetingEternity's work.
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Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:26 am
AlexWaterfall says...



Could you review chapter one of my fantasy story? There isn't any fantasy in it yet, but it will get there ;). work.php?id=94331
  





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Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:04 pm
hockeyfan87 says...



work.php?id=94449 I started writing this story and was wondering if you could review it?(:
when you grow up you realize that Prince Charming is not as easy to find as you thought. You realize the bad guy is not wearing a black cape and he's not easy to spot; he's really funny, and he makes you laugh, and he has perfect hair and isnt wearing a black cape and easy to spot Lots of Love Jenn
  





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Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:12 pm
Ikerot says...



work.php?id=94422

:3
"Good begins with evil, and evil is here to stay." - From The Sovereign
  





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Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:31 am
yubbies21 says...



work.php?id=94611

If you could please....
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