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Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:01 pm
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These three four five wimpy stars are not going to do it for me, so...

Post a link, please.

Poetry only.
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Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:17 am
BlueAfrica says...



If you could review my novel, "Country Boy," I'd really appreciate it! I only have one complete chapter and a chapter in progress so far (although that's five posts because chapter one I did in three parts and chapter two is so far in two parts), but if you could take a look at any or all - I'd especially appreciate reviews on chapter two. I'd prefer in-depth, but a general review is fine as well.

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Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:39 am
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Got the first part done, will do the other parts by tomorrow, certainly.

Keep 'em coming, folks.
  





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Fri Oct 21, 2011 9:14 pm
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Could you review this short story please? :3 Oh, and I'd like a general review, maybe a-little-in-depth-ish ;). Thanks!
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Sat Oct 22, 2011 5:09 pm
Audy says...



Dun-duh-da dun, dun. Duh, done.
  





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Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:36 am
mikepyro says...



I have a piece I think you may enjoy and I'd appreciate a review (however in depth is your choice)
It's under scripts but only because it doesn't fit anywhere else as its an all dialogue story but not script format

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Called Bob the Tumor
I also have a novel called Animal if you're interesed, it's complete so whatever you like.

Basically anthing of mine you want, they're all pretty damn amazing, like me :D
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2011 11:51 pm
MeanMrMustard says...



Hey audy, if you could look at this I'd appreciate it, and give it your best go.
  





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Thu Nov 10, 2011 8:04 pm
Rascalover says...



I need a review please

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Mon Nov 14, 2011 8:21 pm
croissant says...



I'd be really happy to have a review on this piece of poetry.
  





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Mon Nov 14, 2011 8:24 pm
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crescent says...



I'd be really happy to have a review on this piece of poetry.
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Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:53 pm
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Sorry it took so long, everyone. November = last minute preparations for finals, driving around doing errands, and meeting up with family members. But all done, and on holiday. So keep me busy. ^_^
  





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Sat Dec 03, 2011 9:24 pm
Lavvie says...



Audy! Would you review this for me, pretty please?

Thank you<3


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Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:06 am
Jas says...



:D

Can I please have an in-depth review of this and this? They're both going to be edited to be stand-alone pieces for a contest and I've edited both quite a bit already and want some new feedback.

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