@fight4whatisright, I'm going to ask you to read the first post in this thread. While I'd be glad to give you feedback on your novel, that's not really a review per se, and it involves asking me to review an entire novel when my rule is one chapter at a time. Thanks, and come again.
I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
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