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Sun May 15, 2011 12:30 pm
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ziggiefred says...



Hello, hello and hello!

-Have you just submitted your work?
-In need for someone to review it?

*Well, then, don't hesitate to drop me a request, sugar.

Review Criteria
-Any kind of fiction:
>Romance
>Fantasy
>General Fiction
>Action/ Andventure
>Historical
>SciFi
You name it! I'll accept it both in short story and novel format.

-If you have an article too, don't be shy! I am accommodating for all! ...eh, except for poetry. I'm not a great poet so I'll not have any constructive criticism for you lot. Oh, and scripts- I don't do those either, sorry.

Since, I plan on giving you an exceptional review, please don't hesitate on giving me feedback on what you thought about it. I need to know that my victims are happy at all times ;)

Ziggie: Yes, Monners; d'you have a question?
Monica: What should I expect from your reviews?
Ziggie: hmm, why don't you just drop a link and see :D


Well then, just drop me a link and the title of your post, m'kay?

-S'laters!
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Sun May 22, 2011 6:14 pm
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ziggiefred says...



*silence* It's awfully quiet down here.
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Tue May 24, 2011 3:26 pm
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MadameLuxestrange says...



Hey there! Want to review my short story, Lilies for me? I'd love some critique :) topic81141.html

Cheers,
Luxe :D
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Tue May 24, 2011 6:15 pm
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ziggiefred says...



Lux, done! Thanks for the request and please come again...
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Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:50 pm
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ziggiefred says...



*hears crickets* ...and I'm still waiting :)
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Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:23 pm
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SerenityCross says...



Hey could you please review my work? I don't know the link but it is called Guardians Chapter 1 and it is a fantasy novel. Thanks a bunch :smt003
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:29 pm
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ziggiefred says...



SerenityCross, reviewed! thank you for requesting my services :)
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 9:40 pm
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SteviexOctopus says...



I'd love it if you'd review my piece. There are some things in the author's notes that I'd love for you to concentrate on.

1 | The Girl in the White Box - topic82336.html

It's the first chapter to my Scifi/Fantasy novel. Enjoy! =D
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Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:40 am
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Keitaron777 says...



Would you mind review the prologue of my novel? viewtopic.php?t=82001. Please and Thank You!!
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Sun Jun 12, 2011 7:07 pm
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ziggiefred says...



Stevie and Keit, done! :) Please come again...
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Sun Jun 26, 2011 10:53 am
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Mikko says...



Hey! Could you review my poems titled under "Romance" in Lyric poetry, please?
Thanks :)

Mikko'.
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Sun Jun 26, 2011 1:07 pm
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ziggiefred says...



Mikko, done! Please come again :)
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Sun Jun 26, 2011 1:41 pm
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tigershark17 says...



Can you review Hidden Illusions chapter one for me in Romantic Novels?

Thanks!
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Sun Jun 26, 2011 4:40 pm
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ziggiefred says...



Tigershark, done! Please call again ;)
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Tue Jun 28, 2011 6:10 am
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paperbackheart says...



This is awkward but could review Dear Lucy: Chapter One? Please and thank you, it's one of my children and I quite enjoy your reviews.
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