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Sat Oct 22, 2016 11:29 pm
Lumi says...



not gonna look a gift horse in the mouth fam
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:05 am
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you know i got chu
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Tue Oct 25, 2016 12:19 pm
LaPetitePrincess says...



Hi! :) Would you remind reviewing this short story of mine? Of Secrets and Illusions
Thank you! :)
  





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Tue Oct 25, 2016 1:58 pm
Dreamwalker says...



LaPetitePrincess wrote:Hi! :) Would you remind reviewing this short story of mine? Of Secrets and Illusions
Thank you! :)


Done and done. Let me know if you want anything else done or have any questions, yeah
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Tue Nov 22, 2016 10:05 pm
Lumi says...



hummingbird

Asking for the Crusher to come out for this one.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Nov 27, 2016 3:59 am
dracowave says...



Hey Walker I have a story called Return to Nothing. Its a Fantasy story that deals with my own original characters and characters from mythology. I would really appreciate if you could review and give me a few critiques thanks. Return to Nothing Draft
  





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Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:57 am
Dracula says...



I would love a review on Follow The Shining Stars
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
-Demetri Martin
  








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