Young Writers Society

Hey there, Lily!

I would surely love a review on my novel-Turning the Tables. But I am not very keen on getting reviews for the first and second part, so it would be great if you could get the third part critiqued. But I guess you'll have to read the other parts so that you don't get confused. If you don't wanna, it's up to you, and you could ask me to PM you the Story So Far tilll part -two..

Okay, I'll stop now. Thanks in advance!

~Shrubs

Hi, I would love if you could review my script Freya's Replacement. I have just massively edited it, and have not received any reviews on the edited version yet. If it's too long, I understand if you don't want to review it (it's about 8000 words). You could also just read parts 1-5 and then actually review parts 6-8. Again, I understand if it's too long.

Thanks

Rawwwwwwwwwr.
Hey there, lily. Could you please take a quick look at this?
I would be extraordinarily grateful. ^^
Thanks!

Woot Woot!
Done Done!
Who be next brudder maan? *is feelin' stereotypically Jamaican*

Yo. Lily. Yo.

Would you be ever so kind and review the beginning of my romance novel for me, please? Here's da link, bruv: post829187.html#p829187

It's a bit... mehish, but hey, that's what reviewers are here to fix, eh? Please and thank you!

if u have the time can you review some of my poetry on my blog...i dont know how to post a link, sorry

Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long.
Here is a link....
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Thanks a lot!
Really appreciate it!
-Jojo

Anyone else?
Hmm!

*bumps shamelessly then skulks off to actually look for something to review*

*wipes the cobwebs off of the thread*

I don't bite, promise!

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A review on my poem would be handy, if your up for it (:

Doneskies!

Gimmie More! Please!!!!

*drools for something else to review*

Can you please review this? It's a fantasy novel chapter. Thanks in advance!

Tiger

Hey, this is my first major story on here. I worked super hard! Please review it! Thanks!

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Hi Lily!:)

If you don't mind and if you've got time, please take a look at this:
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I'm still really shaky on free verse so I'll need all the help I can get.