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The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews open

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Tue Dec 14, 2010 1:33 pm

LadySpark says...

everyone else is going to have to wait for a while

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:11 pm

Button says...

If you have some time, could you please take a look at this?
topic73251.html

I read that it'll be a while, and that's totally fine. Take your time, all that you need.

Thanks so much!

-Coral-

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Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:13 am

emoinpink says...

Hey will you review this: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic72883.html it's a General Fiction Short Story, you didn't specify anything about that category so I thought I'd just ask. Thanks!

We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance.-Japanese Proverb

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Tue Jan 04, 2011 7:59 pm

LadySpark says...

ALL DONE!

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:02 am

Nightshade says...

Hi, would you be willing to review my latest poem?
topic74229.html
Thanks!

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:57 am

ErBear says...

Pointe! Hello!

If you don't mind, sir, I'd enjoy if you could review this chapter of my work...

viewtopic.php?t=73950

Thank you kindly! XD

(PS- I can take a :X... barely.)

~formerly Ilovebubbles123

"There's only one thing
to do
three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

For you.

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Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:16 pm

LadySpark says...

taylor and Nightshade, done!

any other takers???

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:08 pm

LadySpark says...

doesn't anyone want a review from yours truly?

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:21 pm

LadySpark says...

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

Gender:

Points: 2099
Reviews: 355

Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:11 pm

LadySpark says...

Newly edited. Fresh new look for a fresh new year!

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:49 pm

LadySpark says...

doesn't anyone want a review?????????? please???? *sobs sadly*

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:02 pm

Azila says...

Aw! What a lonely thread. :(

I've just posted something and if you feel like telling me what you think of it, I would appreciate that. It's a Sci-fi flash fiction. Please feel free to be mirthless.

Thanks!

Last edited by Azila on Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:51 pm

LadySpark says...

done! any other takers???

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

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Formerly SparkToFlame

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:18 pm

TabbyGirl says...

I'll take one, please!

viewtopic.php?t=74980

I'd like you to review this "overall." I typed it in Word, so there shouldn't be any grammar errors. However, if you see any, please let me know

THANKS!

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Tabby

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Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:27 pm

LadySpark says...

Tabby Done, any more takers?

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy