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Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:16 pm
Calligraphy says...



Will you review my poem for school? It doesn't have a name. :D

Thanks a bunch,

A. S.
  





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Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:54 am
SilentRain says...



All done! Whos next?!?! Oh, and does anyone know what happend to the Spell Check button???
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Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:59 am
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IgnisandGlacialis says...



Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you could review this for me ... an attempt at a limerick, only my first, so don't be too harsh on me (:

viewtopic.php?t=70077

Thanks!
P.S - I don't know if the copying of the link worked ... *wince* ...
The POTATO of DOOM

A thousand times it calls your name
A thousand times you hear it
And fools are those who heed its call
But fools are those who fear it.

The Interesting Thoughts of Edward Monkton
  





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Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:00 am
IgnisandGlacialis says...



And no, I don't know what happened to the spell check button, I've been looking for it myself ...
(:
The POTATO of DOOM

A thousand times it calls your name
A thousand times you hear it
And fools are those who heed its call
But fools are those who fear it.

The Interesting Thoughts of Edward Monkton
  





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Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:27 am
SilentRain says...



Done, sorry it wasn't more...

Anyone else??

~Rain~
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Mon Oct 11, 2010 7:50 pm
SilentRain says...



Bump-ity Bump Bump Bump!!! :)

I'm starving over here!!! FEED ME!!!!!!!!! Please???

~Rain~
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Wed Oct 13, 2010 3:01 am
Azula says...



Would you mind reviewing my poem: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=70624?
They, are not your MUFFINS!!!!!!!!!! - John Worthing/Ernest Moncrieff (The importance of being Ernest)
  





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Thu Oct 14, 2010 1:39 am
SilentRain says...



Done with that!

Now, who is gonna feed me next????

~Rain~
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Thu Oct 14, 2010 2:50 am
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Jashael says...



SilentRain wrote:I will review any poem that I am asked to... and some photography... Just tell me which...

When I review a poem normally I will tell you if I liked it or not, what I liked and didn't like about it, why I liked or didn't like that, and what I think you could do to make it better.

I will only review poems (and some photography), so don't ask me to review a story or a book, okay?

Thank you, :smt003

~Rain~


Hello, SR. :) Please review this: post773697.html#p773697. Thanks! :D
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not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”

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Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:39 am
SilentRain says...



All done!!

Still hungry though!!!

~Rain~
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Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:40 pm
hollisterhoney3500 says...



could you please review my poem?

post774334.html?hilit=stay strong#p774334
  





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Sun Oct 17, 2010 2:33 am
DannielleLovesong says...



Could you please review my poem I guess this is Goodbye? Thank you. You're awesome.

~Dannielle~
"If you don't see a door, make a door. If you can't make a door, make a window." --Alondra de la Perra
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Mon Oct 18, 2010 10:06 pm
SilentRain says...



All done!! Who's next to try to feed the starving poet??
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Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:56 am
Jashael says...



Okay, SR. Drive nuts. =))

viewtopic.php?t=70228
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Wed Oct 20, 2010 1:30 am
SilentRain says...



Done! :smt003

Next??

Still hungry here (its a wonder I'm not fat!)

~Rain~
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