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Mon Jul 01, 2013 9:50 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done with both! Who else would like a review?
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Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:36 pm
Rainn says...



Hello,
Would you mind reviewing my poem?
Thanks!
Undisclosed(edited)
"My Specialty is the Arts."
  





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Fri Jul 05, 2013 5:53 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done Rainn! Who's next?
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Sat Jul 06, 2013 8:17 pm
Rurouni says...



Back In Black

Here you are.
Cookies!
  





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Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:42 pm
skorlir says...



This may be difficult to review (and not for grammatical reasons), but perhaps you'll be willing to give it a chance. It's not too terribly long.

All is Well, Perforce.

Thanks!

~Skorlir
  





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Sun Jul 07, 2013 6:46 pm
Auxiira says...



Hey Tammie! This is Defective, Chap 1 for you. (it's a leetle long)

Defective Chapter One: White rooms and Human souls
You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014

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Sun Jul 07, 2013 10:11 pm
Dhendon says...



I have posted a few new additions to my story, and I haven't really gotten any reviews on them yet. I have the link to my first chapter, since its continuous, if you want to start reading for backstory first. I also have the link for one of my newer chapters with no reviews, so either way, I'd love a review. Thanks!

To start at chapter one:
Disaster Zone: Chapter One: Some Girl

Chapter Five with one review:
Disaster Zone: Chapter Five: Twenty Questions

Chapter Six with no reviews:
Disaster Zone: Chapter Six: Breakfast

Where ever you would like to start, stop, etc. I've simply provided the links for easy access.
  





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Mon Jul 08, 2013 7:00 pm
Paige says...



Hi Arctic!

I posted the 3rd chapter of Identical yesterday, and the first two chapters got immediate likes and reviews, but this time, not many people have responded to it at all.

So if you have a chance, could you please check out Chapter 3 - Reactivity?


I don't know if you've read any of the previous chapters, but I'd love to have feedback from you!
The only work I really need a review on is Chapter 3, which has zero reviews. Thanks!
Identical: Chapter One - Reminiscing
Identical: Chapter Two - Realism
Identical: Chapter Three - Reactivity

With Love,
Paige
  





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Sun Jul 14, 2013 9:32 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Okay, I am slowly but surely getting to those reviews :). I'm about to enter my last week of school, so post-Friday I am free. However, I'm sure you all know how hectic and crazy the last week of school can be.

So until Friday, I'm sad to say I won't be accepting any requests. Thanks for understanding!

-Arc x
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Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:26 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Okay, now with school over I am free to take reviewing requests, so please, request away!

I have done peg's, skorlir's, and Auxiira's reviews. I am half way through Dhendon's, and paige you shall see yours soon :)
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Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:09 pm
goldenrebel says...



"The Simulation" is an idea of mine that I have had for months and I decided to start writing it. If I get enough positive criticism I'll try to continue the story building on my current character and others.

The Simulation
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Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:18 pm
deleted17 says...



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Have your chin up, and speak up.Otherwise, nothing will get done.And what you need to say, will never be heard.Just be confident in what you say, and stand by it
  





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Tue Jul 23, 2013 9:51 am
ArcticMonkey says...



Done with those! And Idrinkink, I've already reviewed that poem! xD

Who's next? :)
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Tue Jul 23, 2013 5:18 pm
ImHero says...



The Raven 2

Thank you so much Arctic, if you decide to review me!

Much love for fellow reviewers!
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