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Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:47 pm
BenFranks says...



Since I suddenly have a lot of time on my hands, the reviewing fiasco is back.

Ben Franks On Reviews!

Requested Works Completed:

Spoiler! :


So, on to what I will/won't/might review!

Will!
- Any poetry
- Non-Fiction (speciality!)
- Historical Fiction
- Action & Adventure Fiction
- General Fiction
- Sci-Fi Fiction
- Prologues or First Chapters of Novels
(if I've reviewed the previous chapter, I can review the next one, just dont post a request to review chapter 6 when I haven't read any of your novel yet...)
- Art & Photography

Might!
- Romantic Fiction
- Scripts

Won't!
- Fanfiction
- Lyrics
- Fantasy Fiction
- Advanced Critiques


Generally my reviews will focus on content, character, plot development and dialogue. Poetry reviews will focus on structure, word choice and punctuation.



Please post a request.
Do not post a request when the topic states 'CLOSED'.
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Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:22 pm
Flower~Child says...



Will you review this for me? It's under romantic short stories, and it's just the first chapter. You can't tell much about the story yet, but it will get better I promise.

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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:13 am
Elinor says...



Hey Ben!

Could you review The Land of the Faeries for me? It's a new poem I've just posted under Narrative Poetry. :) Thanks much!

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Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:37 pm
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Done Ladies! ;)
  





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Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:02 am
Wolferion says...



Cheers Ben Franks!
Would like to ask for a review on a 2nd chapter of Sinful Pride as it's got no reviews and I think the fight is a bit 15+ ^^

If you feel like it, it'd be really great if you could give an opinion on 1st too, they're both not really long ( especially 2nd, it's pretty short to be honest ). There's no rush at all and if you'd like something in return for your kindness, please let me know. Otherwise I'll do it random ( which most of the time is me donating people points ).

Have a nice day!
Kyou
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Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:17 am
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I'll be happy too! Should be done by tonight ;)
  





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Thu Sep 02, 2010 8:24 am
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Re-opened. Need to do 100+ Reviews this month [September] so get posting requests!

This WRFF thread will close again 1st Oct. 2010 so I can focus on my Sixth Form magazine, A Levels and Art projects.
  





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Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:45 pm
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Wolferion says...



Cheers Ben!

Working on a new project and I'd like to ask you once again for a review =) Read about that magazine you'd be focusing on, I wish you good luck at that once the time comes.

Anyways, here's the link =) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69044.html

Best wishes,
Kyou
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:10 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hi there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks in advance! :smt003

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I would have risen from the ground.
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:48 pm
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Hey, I will get these done tomorrow. Bit busy today, sorry for the wait! Trust me though, I shall make up for it! ;)
  





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Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:23 pm
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Done guys. :)
  





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Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:25 pm
Elinor says...



Hey Ben! Could you do this for me?
Thanks in advance. ^^

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Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:22 pm
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Done Elinor.
  





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Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:49 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there, me again. Would you please review this short story for me? It's gotten some good reviews and I've revised it about a million times but I want it to be as strong as possible because I'm thinking about submitting it for something. Thanks a bunch in advance!

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Sat Sep 11, 2010 2:30 pm
Calligraphy says...



Hey could you review my short storyCoat of Many Colors

Thanks,

A. S.
  








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