Shub, would you mind if you helped me review my piece for Skins's contest? I know you are going to judge it soon, but I think I need all the reviews I can get, so. Pwease?
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again. and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.
hi Shubs, here to request a review, its a novel (6. chapters so far) and I would love a review! I don't care how ya do it, but I don't really need nit-picked.. novel.php?id=976
Or, I guess that should be me me me! As in, please review for me, please? I'd love your thoughts on this. It's the fourth chapter of my novel, but there's a "What you need to know" included at the top, and honestly, because I don't plan out novels ahead of time, not much has happened anyway.
But I would so love your thoughts on the matter. I'll even bribe you with...with... a steaming mug of homemade peppermint hot chocolate!!
Many thanks even if you just consider it!
Rach
I don't fangirl. I fandragon.
Have you thanked a teacher lately? You should. Their bladder control alone is legend.
All set and done. Rachael removed her piece, so couldn't review that , but I'll review it when she asks me to. And I am done with Pointy. I can't believe my speed.
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
Surround yourself with people who are serious about being writers, and who will tell you, ‘Hey—you can do better than this.’ Who will be critical of your work, but also supportive. And who will not be competitive in a negative way. — Isabel Quintero
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