Hey I was just wondering if you could review my novel-A Criminal's Heart. I have posted seven chapters plus a prologue. Tun it down if you don't wanna. The link to the novel is in my signature.
~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
Would you mind looking at my poem, Photograph to Sand? There's a rather long spoiler I'm afraid, which is necessary to help one understand the poem, so please read that first if you don't mind.
Also, I don't mind you being honest, but please don't be too harsh. I can usually take it, but...Well, the spoiler'll explain everything.
Thanks so much, Vampyre.
By the way, the link is in my signature
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
Hey there! So, I just posted a short story that needs reviews, and people to help me make it better! Please help me!!! It's a bit rough, so please be as harsh/nit-picky as you like! Thanks in advance!!
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
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