you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again. and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.
Would you mind looking at this flash fiction sci-fi piece I wrote? Thankee muchly! I'll review anything of yours in return. If you want me to, just say so. ^_^
...just to make you happy, and just because your last one was so helpful, I'm back with another request! This is my entry for Skins's contest, and I've edited it a lot. I think I'm pretty happy with the version I have now, but I would love to have another opinion!
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