Thanks Skins! I er made a mistake though. I gave you the wrong link. >.<
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Hi! I'd appreciate it if you could review this viewtopic.php?t=78580 for me XD Oh and I realised the batteries aren't included *sighs* I shall go find some!
And your semi bribery-ness
~Tinkem
"The rabbit always squeals in the jaws of the fox, but when has another rabbit ever rushed up to save it?" Damon Salvatore ;'( please, my lump, he just needs HUGS <3 Need a review? Just ask Just keep writing, just keep writing, do-do-do-do-do
After your motivational speech about my writing, I did think about it, and did find that it's half decent as it was before I came here, so I should merry with that thought for the time being.
I wrote the new beginning of Turning the Tables! Here's the link, and it would be ever sweet of you to review meh: Turning the Tables (1.1)
P.S. It's not that groggy part I wrote before, but something I had in minds before that scene. So, I think it should be fun. And I didn't get inspire with the club scene from your story. I had been writing it before you posted.
LOL, here goes Shubhi explaining herself again! x3!
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
ooo I think I found one of my new fantasy fiction reviewers. You and Azila looked pretty good. I'm just getting back into the swing of things and I need some people to review some of my stories for this story novel collection type thingy. None of the stories are related so you should be fine.
I gotta get reviews on these and do some edits before I can put up the last three stories in the book. Also need to do some reviewing on other people's work. (Been inactive for awhile.) I'll probably come back for seconds then. Well Good luck, Thanks and I hope you'll review this.
Hey there I've heard pretty amazing things about your reviewing so I decided to pay your profile a visit... then a found this, clicked the link and here we are!!
I'd love if you could review: novel.php?id=1013 any of the chapters really! I posted the link so that you can read the whole thing if you want to follow the story. Alternatively you can just pick a chapter (preferably the ones with the least reviews). Thanks!!!
*Oh and I need very nit-picky review! All the notes from reviews are put into my files for later So grammer, characters, overall impression - the lot!
All reviews are done, but from today until a week or so has passed, I'm not accepting requests because I'll be busy on a boat in the middle of the ocean that's around Egypt. As you do.
To have more, you have to become more. Don't wish it was easier - wish you were better. For things to change, you have to change, and for things to get better, you have to get better. — Jim Rohn
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