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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?



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Thu Jun 10, 2010 6:38 pm
Sins says...



Done Jemjive. :)

Sorry it was kind of long...

Anyone else?
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:31 pm
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BenFranks says...



Might not be your cup o'tea, but everyone loves a read of my columns once in a while :wink: haha, take a look at this and tell me what you think:

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Cheers in advance.
  





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Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:33 am
Jas says...



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Pweeease? :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:46 pm
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TheEvilWithin says...



Please review my story, I will give you all of my points in return. ^_^

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Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:57 pm
Sins says...



All done guys! :pirate3:
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Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:15 pm
Yuriiko says...



Hey there, Skins!

Can you review my entry (for you Music with words contest)?
Here's the link: topic64143.html

Thanks in advance. :D
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Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:22 pm
Sins says...



Done Yuri! :)
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Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:37 am
Flower~Child says...



Please? It's just the first part of a story I'm writing.

topic65262.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:49 pm
Sins says...



Done! 8)

Anyone else...?
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Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:23 pm
Flower~Child says...



Hey skins, second part as requested!

topic65318.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Fri Jun 18, 2010 6:10 pm
Sins says...



All done, Flower. :pirate3:

Anyone else need a review?
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Fri Jun 18, 2010 9:03 pm
Jas says...



Hey,

Could you review the prologue and first two chapters of my new story? It's called Remorse. Here's the links.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=65239 = Chapter One

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=64948 =Prologue
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Fri Jun 18, 2010 11:09 pm
Sins says...



Finished yours, jas. 8)

Next...?
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:40 am
screamandshout says...



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It's dramatic poetry so please check it out.
  





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Sun Jun 20, 2010 2:24 am
Waterlilygirl says...



Can you please Review: Would you care?
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