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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?



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Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:40 pm
LittlePrincess says...



novel.php?id=374

Thank you so much! (Feel free to pick and choose any chapters you feel like doing)
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Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:53 am
Sins says...



I'll get to that as soon as possible, Princess. :)

It might take me a while though because I want to read the whole thing and then give you and overall review at the end about what I think of the story.
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Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:36 pm
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It took me a while... but I'm all done, Princess :D

I hope that I helped somewhat.

Anyone else want a review now that I'm free...?
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Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:11 pm
Valentine says...



Can you please review this?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic67620.html
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Fri Jul 30, 2010 1:27 pm
Sins says...



Done, Val 8)

Next...?
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Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:06 am
MasterofChaos says...



Hello.

Can you review this?

topic67756.html

If you want, I can link the earlier chapters.
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Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:23 am
thehobbitgangster says...



Hey would you please review this?

It's a prologue to a story I'v been working on. It's sort of action adventure/somewhat sci-fi

viewtopic.php?t=67749

Thank you!
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Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:47 pm
Sins says...



All done, guys :)

Anyone else...?
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Tue Aug 03, 2010 6:03 pm
Lena.Wooldridge says...



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Thank you.
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Wed Aug 04, 2010 5:19 pm
Sins says...



Done, Lena :)

Does anyone else want a review before I go on holidays?
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Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:39 pm
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I remade my poem. topic67891.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:10 am
Yuriiko says...



My poem dude!

topic67956.html

Thanks in advance!
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Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:03 pm
Sins says...



Doneee guys. :D

Now, I'm going on holidays for two weeks later today, so I don't think I'll be able to get anymore reviews done by then. I'm still open for requests, but don't expect anything until at least two weeks... I might be able to get internet connection in the hotel I'm staying in, but I can't promise anything. With any luck, they'll have wi-fi in Palma... :lol:
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Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:13 am
jemjive says...



You give amazing reviews so I think I am willing to wait two weeks. :)
Here is a Romantic Short I wrote, though it is a little bit on the long side hahah.
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Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:07 pm
Sins says...



All done, Jem :D

I'm now back open for anyone else who wants a review!
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