Hello Evi, I was wondering if you could critique my short story called Principle Mackenzie viewtopic.php?t=53552 Its a smidget under 1500 words. Oh, and comma abuse will be present. So don't bother pointing it out because, well, I know it's there. THANK YOU for the super-helpful and wonderfully awesome review!! You rock.
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