Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
Could I bother you once more for a review? You were just so darn helpful and encouraging the last time, I can't resist. Whenever you have the time. I've taken your advice about the abstractions to heart!
If I had wings, I would have opened them. I would have risen from the ground. -Mary Oliver
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Imagination is more important than knowledge. knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world-Albert Einstine Never argue with an idiot. They drag you down to their level, then beat you with experience-Fool need a review? just PM me!
I have a general fic short that I would very appreciate a review of, not really any requests concerning the review, just let me know what you think if you have the time. Thank you for your time, it is much appreciated. MVP topic66512.html
could you take a review on this one "Linger on Your Pale Blue Eyes"? is so, could you please not go on details and just give your opinion on it...Topic ID: 66562
As requested, all reviews posted until now have been given!
Just remember, lovelies, please read my initial thread to know the rules of requests. If you are asking for a review for someone other then yourself, you will not get a review. If you do not link to the work, you will probably not get a review. Going against both of these things frustrates me greatly.
If you want a review, make it easier on me and post to the link. I want to give you reviews, I do! But even more than I want to give reviews, I want people to read my initial thread. Hope everyone likes the reviews they got!
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.” ― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo
It is in the fantasy section but this section has no fantasy elements that are obvious. If you didn't see it in the fantasy section you probably wouldn't even know it was fantasy. I suppose that's a bad thing.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.
I've been experimenting more, definitely trimming down the floweriness of my writing, reducing the figurative language to a more appropriate level, I think. Trying to write pieces that are a little more substantial.
If I had wings, I would have opened them. I would have risen from the ground. -Mary Oliver
If you could, can you inform me of places I can elaborate and extend my first chapter. I appreciate a very meticulous review. I can't wait to get one from you. Thank You very much. [urlhttp://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post801572.html#p801572][/url]
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