Young Writers Society

Mind returning the favour?

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Go nuts. And it would probably help to listen to the song at the bottom before critiquing, and see if the piece fits with the song. (This is for Jabs' Christmas song contest)

Please and thank you!

I'd be happy to =) Got a few other pieces lined up but expect it within the next 24 hours.

Keep them coming guys, I've got a new goal of reaching 1500 before the 15th May which should be easy but we'll see. My list as it stands:

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Hey, Kitty! I was wondering if you could take a look at this? And if you have anything, send me the link to one of your pieces! I'd love to take a look at it!

-Jared

Sure thing Jared. Sorry about the short delay everyone, moving back to uni has set me a little behind but I'll get back on track soon.

Hello, Kitty! So pleased to meet you. I'm Pop!

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^^Just a short and sweet poem in need of a little attention. Thank you so much!


*anti-pop

You can critique mine if you'd like! I'd very mucho happy if you did. I'll also give you a shinny, new.... lolipop! Yummm.... Lolipops....

=]

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Have fun tearing it to shreds, hope it doesn't suck too badly. =P

Gee, you're getting floods of requests! That's because you're awesome, of couse. ^_^

If you have time you'd make me really happy if you could review this

Thank you! ^_^

Hey! I'd love a review on this:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43098.html

And I insist you leave a piece or two of your own you'd like reviewed. Don't want you helping me out like that for nothing. =)

If you've got time, because you're getting so many requests!

Hey Kitty Nice to meet you.

Somebody recommended you as a good reviewer and from all the requests you are getting it looks like it's true lol

I would like it if you could review these. I only says these because they are two halves of chapter 1. I need more reviews on the second half though It's Fantasy.

Here are the links -

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Thank you!

To the death! My novel,
Prologue:
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Chapter 1:
Part 1: topic42563.html
Part 2: topic43068.html
Thanks!

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here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

hey Kitty. Looks like you're pretty busy...
Got time for a short poem?

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Thanks so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

*Bumps* See the post on the first page for specifications but in short, I'm taking requests again.

Could you please review my story?
It's science fiction and 1200 words.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60055.html

Thanks

Hola!

I'm looking for a great review and would love it if you could bump me up to the top of your list for me because I need to turn it in tomorrow as an essay for school, and it's not been edited yet.

So here's A Perfect Circle, and if you can't get to it before tomorrow, that's okay. I understand that reviewing takes time ^^

~Peanut