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Hey Lucrezia! I hoping you could drop a review on my work Inciting Incident p1. It's been sitting in the green room for a few days, so I've been wanting some feedback before I publish the next part.
Thank you for your help!

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Hiya! I was wondering if you'd be alright with reviewing the recent chapters of my story Wakefield, Wyoming? It's only 4 chapters in, but it's up to you how you want to review (if you even want to, of course)! I don't really have much to say besides that. I just think you'd be good for reviewing it (and I'm a bit shy to ask other strangers but I'm working on it)

Here's the link to the most recent chapter
Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 4.

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My Introduction for my novel. Does it hook you into wanting to read further?

Please.

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Thank you!