Hi, I would love it if you could help me out with a review on my short story Hypoxia. It's been a while since I've written in this medium so I'm trying to shake the rust off and feedback really helps. Thanks in advance
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining behind the clouds is the sun still shining
looseleaf wrote:Sorry for the late response, @Fishr, but I'll try to get to it this weekend! (poke me on Monday if I haven't done it yet ))
Heh. So. I did some editing, and now I’m not sure if it is qualified as a short story anymore. But if you want to give it a go, I’m most interested in character development. Memento Mori
hiya! No idea if this is still open, but if it is, I'd love if you'd review the opening chapter to my novel: Wakefield, Wyoming. 1941. As of typing, there's zero reviews and there's only a slight reference to blood and such, so hopefully that falls in line with your requirements. Thanks for considering!
Hi Looseleaf!! If you have the time, I'd really appreciate a review of my new poem. Just so you know, it is centering around politics, but it's nothing detailed just a reflection. Here's the link!!
Too often we crave the extraordinary in life, without even learning how to cherish the ordinary first.
Friend, I promise you this: if you can learn to take joy in the simple mundane things in life, the extraordinary will take care of itself, it'll be on its way, hurrying towards you. But if you skip the first part, it'll ever evade you. — Arcticus
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