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Sun Sep 13, 2020 7:18 pm
momonster says...



thank you @Rosewood! i'll get to that soon.
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

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Tue Oct 06, 2020 7:02 pm
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Riverlight says...



@LordMomo Here's a poem I wrote last night

Dark Memories
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Thu Oct 08, 2020 1:57 am
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Glauke says...



Hi, I'd love a review on my new piece! I'm specifically looking for thoughts and advice regarding the ending. Thanks in advance <3

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Sun Oct 25, 2020 12:37 am
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Riverlight says...



Here ya go!

I Met a Senator Once
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  








I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint